When the Wild Bells Stopped

Bells worn on ankles by the tribe's fireside
    Joyful dancing began when smoke signals rose high
A son was born to the chief and his bride
    Ring out wild bells to the wild sky

The young warrior’s time had soon come
    His first battle was won when spring was nigh
The tribe had a victory dance beneath setting sun
    Ring out wild bells to the wild sky

The Native American village was invaded by whites
    And the chief’s soul to heaven did fly
His son donned the headdress as his father received last rites
    Ring out wild bells to the wild sky

The proud tribe was confined to a reservation
    And the young chief died trying to defy
This was the last dance of a tribal nation
    Ring out wild bells to the wild sky



*For Dr. Ram's "Ring Out Wild Bells to the Wild Sky" contest
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May 30, 2011 at 11:59 AM
Another wonderful write from you....
Haick Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 11:59 AM
Warm congratulations on your win in the Contest, Carolyn!! So very well-deserved! Thanks my dear friend!! Love, Audrey
Villarosa Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 7:46 AM
Carolyn, congratulations on your well deserved win to Dr. Ram's contest. You brought us into another world's culture, great write and nice depiction. (^_^) Noel.
Mannan Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 6:51 AM
Many congratulations dear friend for this terrific win.
Brown Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 4:29 AM
Carolyn, congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 11:08 PM
Many Congrats Carolyn on notching up 3rd spot in the contest with this excellent piece.... Good weaving of history in this creation ...... Luv/Best wishes always...Hitendra Mehta
Maverick Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 6:57 PM
as you can see being resourcefull after my first shock, at getting a mention i have found the contests conclusion, anyway most pleased to see your placement, most worthy,
Freeman Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 5:05 PM
Yep, and to think the American Indians actually saved some of the first settlers from starvation by teaching them how to grow various veggies. Congratulations Carolyn on your worthy poem's third place. Agape, Moses
Dufresne Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 2:35 PM
Now this one is really good, Caroline....everything fits so well in it and with the contest....including your win.Congrats to you! Impressive write...you go girl!
Gorelick Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 2:25 PM
Not surprised LNC..I knew this was going to be a winner. Congrats and love. Bg
Henderson Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 2:15 PM
Carolyn, congratulations on your win in the contest with this fine poem. I thought I had already commented on it but do not see one. I am partial to anything Indian because they were treated so harshly. I don't know how any civilized generation, as individuals or as a nation could treat any peoples so badly.
Mehta Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 1:36 PM
You have chosen an excellent theme for the contest, Congratulations for this third place win, Carolyn
Knop Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 4:26 AM
I wrote a comment on your poem, Carolyn and then it was gone!! What a great contribution for Dr. Ram's contest and best of luck. To force Native Americans into reservation was a crime! Too many starved and died! Thank you for all your kind comments on my work!..Love, Gert
Knop Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 4:24 AM
This poem of yours, Carolyn is a great contribution for Dr. Ram's contest and best of luck. It was a crime to press Native Americans into reservations where they starved and died. So well written and thank you for all your kind comments. I haven't been much on soup lately as I had to revise my manuscript of a novel. Love, Gert
Shango Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 11:28 AM
I wish a nation had your heart, for you respect people so much as you love them, and your poems are truly you in faith and beauty. Thanks for being such a special friend.
Chappell Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 9:10 PM
your have a wonderful way to your writes Carolyn duncan
Freeman Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 6:12 PM
Quit a unique story you've come up with Carolyn. I did an AABB rhyme scheme. I see yours is ABAB. I guess it doesn't matter. At any rate beautiful story in rhyme and refrain. Agape, Moses
Muzzey Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 8:04 AM
Simply wonderful. A treasure you have so carefully penned, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest this is a perfect entry. Caryl
Dietrich Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 11:00 PM
GREAT way to do this contest too, CArolyn, LIke an elegy almost , which was the intent of the poet who penned that line. Dr. Ram's contest is producing many fine poems. LUv, Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 3:56 PM
I really liked your imaginative "take" on the refrain and the cyclical nature of the verse, a realwinner! Light & Love
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 3:56 AM
Wow, this is a great entry for Dr. Ram's contest. Good luck. I watched a recollection of tribes and treaties from the Native American perspective. It gave quite a different insight about what treaties had been agreed upon...what President had no regard for treaties...and what occurred after treaties were signed...native Americans were attempting to save a culture instead of being swallowed by white man's culture. They succeeded, but many lives were lost in the process. War is atrocious.
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November 2, 2010 at 7:23 AM
I like the direction you took on this theme. Good luck in the contest. Best to you, Diane
Austin Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 2:06 PM
I love the way you set up this poem with the bells around the ankles and the fireside. Super! Love, Dave
Duffin Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 1:11 PM
Hi Carolyn. Thanks for your kind remark.Can you tell me where I can see the winners of the contest. Please help a man in distress. Cheers, Eamon
Brown Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 12:03 PM
Do I see another winner here? I think so Carolyn. Love, Carol
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