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When the Warm Day Dies

When the warm day dies and the cool night begins, then I'll be there, beside you my love, feeling the heat of a beating heart, my arms wrapped round your empty shoulders as I whisper silent words of love and longing in your lonely, unadorned ear.... (note: this poem 'came' to me last night while I watched the love duet at the end of Tosca, where the lovers are about to die but they don't know it yet.) 12/15/15

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Date: 5/10/2021 10:41:00 PM
Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/11/2021 7:50:00 AM
Thank you!!!
Date: 11/18/2017 4:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win, L.J.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/19/2017 9:34:00 AM
Thank you!!!
Date: 11/18/2017 4:01:00 AM
Charmingly romantic and whimsical, LJ - congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/19/2017 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Gregory, much appreciated as always!
Date: 11/1/2017 7:24:00 AM
beautiful and romantic dear LJ, thank you and congrats :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/1/2017 7:52:00 AM
Thank you, Laura, for both the kind words and the honor!
Date: 9/23/2016 10:46:00 AM
Len, such a lovely poem...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/23/2016 1:30:00 PM
Thank you, Laura, and as always, I'm honored.
Date: 9/15/2016 9:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win Len
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/15/2016 10:06:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, I much appreciate it!
Date: 1/23/2016 12:08:00 PM
Wisdom and arts hug as twins in between your lines. A wonderful 7
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Date: 1/5/2016 5:55:00 PM
wonderful to be a poet and be inspired by such things. I have often been inspired by certain movie scenes that are simply unforgettable! Nicely done.
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Date: 12/16/2015 9:52:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One (love the intrinsic irony of your pen name)-- I just changed the last line-- even that 'came' to me over night-- writing poetry is weird!
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