When the Tide Remembers!

The sea was a whisper before it was water,
cleaved through the wind.
I stepped into its silver mouth,
waves curling something pressing in
a wistful longing for a past I never knew.

Seagulls traced ethereal designs across the expanse
their wails scattered like fragments.
Somewhere underneath the foam,
the past was fossilized within sedimentary strata
waiting for my hands to delve deep enough to find it.

The tide came in more forcefully
and I thought of to how love in this way
always arriving, always leaving---
sometimes tender, sometimes intense enough
to split the coast in two.

When it ebbed, it left behind more than remnants of a disaster,
it embodied the ideal I sought;
calmed by the steady undulations of the sea,
gleaming in calmness;
as if the tide dredged up
on the verge of being forgotten.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 9:15 PM
"always arriving, always leaving--- sometimes tender, sometimes intense enough to split the coast in two." <3
Velasco Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 9:17 PM
Thank you! I loved writing that line—it’s meant to capture how something (or someone) can be both gentle and powerful all at once.
M  Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 2:39 AM
Just loved this Rowena…the way you describe is amazing! Debx
Velasco Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 3:11 AM
Thanks Deb!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 5:34 PM
just wow! How captivating and moving your poem is! I especially liked: Somewhere underneath the foam, the past was fossilized within sedimentary strata waiting for my hands to delve deep enough to find it Outstanding poetic voice! hugs, Sara
Velasco Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 5:58 PM
Thank you so much, Sara! hugs back to you!
Godwin Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 4:32 PM
Once again, you have exquisitely used words to deliver myself to me. I've felt this clouded but definite feeling, know it well and thrill to how you expressed it. Check 2nd line in 3rd stanza, a typo, I'm a thinkin. I'm a better me after reading and appreciating this poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Velasco Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 5:57 PM
Thanks a ton, CayCay! I’m so glad the poem spoke to you like that. And thanks for spotting that typo—I’ll fix it for sure. It’s awesome to know it made you feel a bit better. Big poetry hugs!
Buehler Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 2:57 PM
Exquisitely beautiful, Rowena. I love the final verse. :)
Velasco Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 5:56 PM
Thank you so much!
Pettit Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 12:46 PM
Quite a descriptive write that puts anyone into a fine vicarious experience.
Velasco Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 12:59 PM
Thanks so much! I’m really happy it could take you there and let you feel the moment.
Derbyshire Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 12:46 PM
Descriptions are beautifully discussed.. Sea of love...
Velasco Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 1:00 PM
Thank you!
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