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When the Tide Remembers!

The sea was a whisper before it was water, cleaved through the wind. I stepped into its silver mouth, waves curling something pressing in a wistful longing for a past I never knew. Seagulls traced ethereal designs across the expanse their wails scattered like fragments. Somewhere underneath the foam, the past was fossilized within sedimentary strata waiting for my hands to delve deep enough to find it. The tide came in more forcefully and I thought of to how love in this way always arriving, always leaving--- sometimes tender, sometimes intense enough to split the coast in two. When it ebbed, it left behind more than remnants of a disaster, it embodied the ideal I sought; calmed by the steady undulations of the sea, gleaming in calmness; as if the tide dredged up on the verge of being forgotten.

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Date: 8/10/2025 2:39:00 AM
Just loved this Rowena…the way you describe is amazing! Debx
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/10/2025 3:11:00 AM
Thanks Deb!
Date: 8/9/2025 5:34:00 PM
just wow! How captivating and moving your poem is! I especially liked: Somewhere underneath the foam, the past was fossilized within sedimentary strata waiting for my hands to delve deep enough to find it Outstanding poetic voice! hugs, Sara
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/9/2025 5:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara! hugs back to you!
Date: 8/9/2025 4:32:00 PM
Once again, you have exquisitely used words to deliver myself to me. I've felt this clouded but definite feeling, know it well and thrill to how you expressed it. Check 2nd line in 3rd stanza, a typo, I'm a thinkin. I'm a better me after reading and appreciating this poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/9/2025 5:57:00 PM
Thanks a ton, CayCay! I’m so glad the poem spoke to you like that. And thanks for spotting that typo—I’ll fix it for sure. It’s awesome to know it made you feel a bit better. Big poetry hugs!
Date: 8/9/2025 2:57:00 PM
Exquisitely beautiful, Rowena. I love the final verse. :)
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/9/2025 5:56:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 8/9/2025 12:46:00 PM
Descriptions are beautifully discussed.. Sea of love...
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/9/2025 1:00:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 8/9/2025 12:46:00 PM
Quite a descriptive write that puts anyone into a fine vicarious experience.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/9/2025 12:59:00 PM
Thanks so much! I’m really happy it could take you there and let you feel the moment.

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