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There is one kind of beauty in a morning walk illuminated by the moon..and yet…there is a different kind of beauty walking after a rain…when all the streets are wet. The streets take on a glow…one you never see at noon…the shadows seem to shimmer in light reflected from the moon. There is a freshness in the air…a coolness in the breeze…as it carries with it raindrops it has shaken from the trees. Still enough raindrops remain upon the trees…those unable to take flight…giving the trees a feeling of Christmas…as they sparkle in the night. Age seems to fade away…as you breathe the misty air into your lungs…as you splash around in puddles…like you did when you were young. If you listen to the crickets…the owls…the nightingales…you find it difficult to decide…if you are hearing more sounds than usual…or if they’re just amplified. You stop a moment…look up…and give thanks…grateful you’ve been allowed…to watch the moon, the stars….the planets…playing hide and seek among the clouds. And you pause as you’re walk is ending…trying to remember everything because you don’t want to forget… the sights the sounds from your morning walk… when all the streets are wet.

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Date: 3/5/2022 1:26:00 PM
The lights the sounds, such nice imagery. I enjoyed your rhyme!
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Date: 1/5/2022 5:39:00 PM
This poem is exquisite, Jim! Glad you were introduced to me today!
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Date: 1/5/2022 10:39:00 AM
You painted a beautiful scene with your words. I feel like I was there. Lovely piece, Jim.
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Date: 4/18/2021 2:58:00 PM
charming poem, Jim ~ congrats on your POTD
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Date: 4/18/2021 4:39:00 AM
This is beautiful... so painful to read and write, too, I imagine. God bless you always and thank you for your service! God bless you always again and again. I have a calf I call "Shadow"... as black as night... congrats on POTD and sending prayers for you, Love, Gina
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Date: 4/18/2021 4:49:00 AM
Thank you Regina, the gremlins have struck, your comment ended up on the previous days potd. Tom
Date: 4/17/2021 9:40:00 PM
This is beautiful Jim! Thank you for taking me with you on your morning walk to see such a sight! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 4/17/2021 5:21:00 PM
*Watch the moon, the stars… the planets… playing hide and seek among the clouds* Oh my, yes ! I captivated by this thought. The moment I read your title, I knew I would be left in awe. I love everything about the rain. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Congratulations Jim, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 4/17/2021 3:33:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, congratulations on POTD Jim!
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Date: 4/17/2021 2:09:00 PM
I loved the rhyme scheme, at first hidden but then my subconscious awaking me to them. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/17/2021 1:58:00 PM
Great pen Jim, full of great imagery and insightful thought too, congratulations on the POTD. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 4/17/2021 1:31:00 PM
I enjoyed the peaceful calm of this morning walk, Jim, congrats on POTD. John
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Date: 4/17/2021 1:23:00 PM
Congrats on POTD! I love walk in the rain but only in India or California! In England I would freeze!!
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Date: 4/17/2021 11:59:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., Jim :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/17/2021 11:42:00 AM
Lovely piece, it's imagery profound. Congratulations on POTD! My Best, Paulette
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Date: 4/17/2021 11:21:00 AM
Jim, you took your readers on this walk with you! Congrats on POTD! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/17/2021 9:51:00 AM
Jim, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY with your wonderful write, well done, love _Constance
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Date: 4/17/2021 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Jim. Nice work.
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Date: 4/17/2021 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a Wonderful story/write. I loved walking down your wet street. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
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Date: 4/17/2021 6:51:00 AM
WoW! Jim, You painted such a lovely picture with words. You are in touch with the beauty of nature. Good content, imagery and rhymes. Thanks for taking me on such a spectacular walk. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/17/2021 6:27:00 AM
I really enjoyed this poem. Beautifully written. Congratulations for POTD ! :)
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Date: 4/17/2021 6:22:00 AM
When the lights are on you can see beyond the vision...Congratulations Jim Yerman on POTD...Well done.
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Date: 4/17/2021 4:41:00 AM
Jim, I loved this from the moment I read it, will add it top my faves, many congrats on POTD SO nice to see a new name get the honour:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/17/2021 4:35:00 AM
Your poetry merits more attention than it gets, Jim. Congratulations on your potd and your talent. Early morning is my favorite time of day.
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Date: 4/17/2021 12:34:00 AM
Just returning to say congratulations Jim on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
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Date: 4/16/2021 2:28:00 PM
An enjoyable verse Jim, being able to walk in all weather's shows you're at one with nature, Everything feels clean and fresh after the rain. Tom
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