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When the Streets Are Wet

There is one kind of beauty in a morning walk illuminated by the moon..and yet…there is a different kind of beauty walking after a rain…when all the streets are wet.

The streets take on a glow…one you never see at noon…the shadows seem to shimmer in light reflected from the moon.

There is a freshness in the air…a coolness in the breeze…as it carries with it raindrops it has shaken from the trees.

Still enough raindrops remain upon the trees…those unable to take flight…giving the trees a feeling of Christmas…as they sparkle in the night.

Age seems to fade away…as you breathe the misty air into your lungs…as you splash around in puddles…like you did when you were young.

If you listen to the crickets…the owls…the nightingales…you find it difficult to decide…if you are hearing more sounds than usual…or if they’re just amplified.

You stop a moment…look up…and give thanks…grateful you’ve been allowed…to watch the moon, the stars….the planets…playing hide and seek among the clouds.

And you pause as you’re walk is ending…trying to remember everything because you don’t want to forget…
the sights
the sounds
from your morning walk…
when all the streets are wet.
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Anaya Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 1:26 PM
The lights the sounds, such nice imagery. I enjoyed your rhyme!
Fenn Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 5:39 PM
This poem is exquisite, Jim! Glad you were introduced to me today!
Hoffman Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 10:39 AM
You painted a beautiful scene with your words. I feel like I was there. Lovely piece, Jim.
Gauthier Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 2:58 PM
charming poem, Jim ~ congrats on your POTD
Mcintosh Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 4:39 AM
This is beautiful... so painful to read and write, too, I imagine. God bless you always and thank you for your service! God bless you always again and again. I have a calf I call "Shadow"... as black as night... congrats on POTD and sending prayers for you, Love, Gina
Cunningham Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 4:49 AM
Thank you Regina, the gremlins have struck, your comment ended up on the previous days potd. Tom
Fenn Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 9:40 PM
This is beautiful Jim! Thank you for taking me with you on your morning walk to see such a sight! Congrats on POTD!
Nicole Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 5:21 PM
*Watch the moon, the stars… the planets… playing hide and seek among the clouds* Oh my, yes ! I captivated by this thought. The moment I read your title, I knew I would be left in awe. I love everything about the rain. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Congratulations Jim, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Kitchin Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 3:33 PM
Beautiful imagery, congratulations on POTD Jim!
Rone Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 2:09 PM
I loved the rhyme scheme, at first hidden but then my subconscious awaking me to them. Congratulations.
Mcconnell Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 1:58 PM
Great pen Jim, full of great imagery and insightful thought too, congratulations on the POTD. Blessings,Gordon
Gondolf Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 1:31 PM
I enjoyed the peaceful calm of this morning walk, Jim, congrats on POTD. John
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 1:23 PM
Congrats on POTD! I love walk in the rain but only in India or California! In England I would freeze!!
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 11:59 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., Jim :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Calasibetta Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Lovely piece, it's imagery profound. Congratulations on POTD! My Best, Paulette
Merryman Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 11:21 AM
Jim, you took your readers on this walk with you! Congrats on POTD! Blessings, Kim M
La France Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Jim, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY with your wonderful write, well done, love _Constance
Hankins Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 8:01 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Jim. Nice work.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a Wonderful story/write. I loved walking down your wet street. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Y. Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 6:51 AM
WoW! Jim, You painted such a lovely picture with words. You are in touch with the beauty of nature. Good content, imagery and rhymes. Thanks for taking me on such a spectacular walk. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Sands Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 6:27 AM
I really enjoyed this poem. Beautifully written. Congratulations for POTD ! :)
Michael Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 6:22 AM
When the lights are on you can see beyond the vision...Congratulations Jim Yerman on POTD...Well done.
Allison Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 4:41 AM
Jim, I loved this from the moment I read it, will add it top my faves, many congrats on POTD SO nice to see a new name get the honour:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 4:35 AM
Your poetry merits more attention than it gets, Jim. Congratulations on your potd and your talent. Early morning is my favorite time of day.
Cunningham Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 12:34 AM
Just returning to say congratulations Jim on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
Cunningham Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 2:28 PM
An enjoyable verse Jim, being able to walk in all weather's shows you're at one with nature, Everything feels clean and fresh after the rain. Tom
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