When the storm ends


While running i reached the shore 
Days felt brighter - joys galore 
Even my heart started to melt - it's hardest core 
The dancy wind which i couldn't ignore 

Then it struck - an unknown storm 
No idea where it came from 
The blue sky turned to black - a huge transform 
Still fighting with a huge maelstrom 

Got thrown in cold electric water - made my clothes tore 
Regretted the joy once I held before 
Storms laughed as I started to explore 
I sank after the count of four 

Even tides stood still , drumstruck by storm 
Trees got firm , against the norm
By watching how the waves suddenly transformed




Thankyou
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Kendrick Avatar
April 30, 2025 at 3:50 AM
Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. so delighted to see your name on the winners' list. Sara K
ambasta Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 10:18 AM
Thankyou . By the way which contest I won
Fowler Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations Shambhavi! :)
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August 25, 2025 at 10:18 AM
Thankyou
Kendrick Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 8:38 AM
Very descriptive work. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
ambasta Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 3:29 AM
Thanks a lot, Sara! Glad you vibed with it! More cool stuff on the way :D
Buhagiar Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 10:39 PM
Beautiful imagery. You could have concluded your poem, though sometimes it's good to leave us guessing.
ambasta Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 3:34 AM
Thank you! I’m glad you liked the imagery. I left the ending open on purpose—sometimes, mystery makes the emotions linger a little longer. But I appreciate your perspective!
Dutta Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 7:27 AM
Nicely composed. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Blessings
ambasta Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 9:20 PM
Thankyou for your warm welcome with kindness:)
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 3:20 PM
I enjoyed seeing your poem today. Thanks for commenting on mine
ambasta Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 6:47 PM
Thanks a lot! Glad you enjoyed mine too!
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