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When the storm ends


While running i reached the shore 
Days felt brighter - joys galore 
Even my heart started to melt - it's hardest core 
The dancy wind which i couldn't ignore 

Then it struck - an unknown storm 
No idea where it came from 
The blue sky turned to black - a huge transform 
Still fighting with a huge maelstrom 

Got thrown in cold electric water - made my clothes tore 
Regretted the joy once I held before 
Storms laughed as I started to explore 
I sank after the count of four 

Even tides stood still , drumstruck by storm 
Trees got firm , against the norm
By watching how the waves suddenly transformed




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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/30/2025 3:50:00 AM

Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. so delighted to see your name on the winners' list. Sara K

Shambhavi ambasta
Date: 8/25/2025 10:18:00 AM

Thankyou . By the way which contest I won

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/27/2025 7:50:00 AM

Congratulations Shambhavi! :)

Shambhavi ambasta
Date: 8/25/2025 10:18:00 AM

Thankyou

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2025 8:38:00 AM

Very descriptive work. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Shambhavi ambasta
Date: 2/4/2025 3:29:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Sara! Glad you vibed with it! More cool stuff on the way :D

Tom Woody

Date: 2/3/2025 5:46:00 AM

Here in Florida the natives suffered not one but two devastating hurricanes this year. Still in recovery. Wondering what the next storms will bring

Shambhavi ambasta
Date: 2/4/2025 3:31:00 AM

That’s really rough situation:/ . Hope things get better soon. Sending good vibes your way!"

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/2/2025 10:39:00 PM

Beautiful imagery. You could have concluded your poem, though sometimes it's good to leave us guessing.

Shambhavi ambasta
Date: 2/4/2025 3:34:00 AM

Thank you! I’m glad you liked the imagery. I left the ending open on purpose—sometimes, mystery makes the emotions linger a little longer. But I appreciate your perspective!