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When the storm ends

While running i reached the shore Days felt brighter - joys galore Even my heart started to melt - it's hardest core The dancy wind which i couldn't ignore Then it struck - an unknown storm No idea where it came from The blue sky turned to black - a huge transform Still fighting with a huge maelstrom Got thrown in cold electric water - made my clothes tore Regretted the joy once I held before Storms laughed as I started to explore I sank after the count of four Even tides stood still , drumstruck by storm Trees got firm , against the norm By watching how the waves suddenly transformed Thankyou

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Date: 4/30/2025 3:50:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. so delighted to see your name on the winners' list. Sara K
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Date: 4/27/2025 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations Shambhavi! :)
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Date: 2/3/2025 8:38:00 AM
Very descriptive work. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Shambhavi ambasta
Date: 2/4/2025 3:29:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Sara! Glad you vibed with it! More cool stuff on the way :D
Date: 2/3/2025 5:46:00 AM
Here in Florida the natives suffered not one but two devastating hurricanes this year. Still in recovery. Wondering what the next storms will bring
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Shambhavi ambasta
Date: 2/4/2025 3:31:00 AM
That’s really rough situation:/ . Hope things get better soon. Sending good vibes your way!"
Date: 2/2/2025 10:39:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. You could have concluded your poem, though sometimes it's good to leave us guessing.
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Shambhavi ambasta
Date: 2/4/2025 3:34:00 AM
Thank you! I’m glad you liked the imagery. I left the ending open on purpose—sometimes, mystery makes the emotions linger a little longer. But I appreciate your perspective!
Date: 1/14/2025 7:27:00 AM
Nicely composed. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Blessings
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Shambhavi ambasta
Date: 1/14/2025 9:20:00 PM
Thankyou for your warm welcome with kindness:)
Date: 1/12/2025 3:20:00 PM
I enjoyed seeing your poem today. Thanks for commenting on mine
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Shambhavi ambasta
Date: 1/12/2025 6:47:00 PM
Thanks a lot! Glad you enjoyed mine too!

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