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When the Snow Melts

When the snow is melting There are shapes on the snow They are all not the same Some shapes look like footprints Others the shape or paws prints these different shapes are seen Where fresh snow had spread No one ever walks this path the snow is very very deep So just out of no where shapes the prints appeared from no where Upon the freshly deep snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 5/4/2022 4:24:00 AM
Hello Darlene, I haven't really seen actual thick snow but its interesting to imagine it! Have a great day... :)
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Date: 5/4/2022 6:27:00 AM
Hello Komal, I am thinking you live in a warm climate. I live in Canada. We have 4 seasons. Summer, spring, Autumn, and winter. We are in our Spring season. Winter is the col season. With lots of snow and coldness. Hugs.
Date: 3/22/2021 6:03:00 PM
Hello Darlene … I have never seen snow that I recall. I can only imagine what the images are like as it melts - thank you Darlene - Lindsay
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Date: 4/10/2021 3:11:00 PM
Hello Laurie, you have never seen snow! You must live in a very warm climate. Lucky you. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 3/17/2021 12:43:00 PM
Yes the snow can create a lot of different images. Almost half gone and looking forward to spring. Finally getting some warmth here. Enjoyed your write. love phyl
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Date: 3/18/2021 12:16:00 PM
Hello Phyllis, Although the snow is gone, it is cold outside. it feels like it will snow. i hope i am wrong. I want spring weather. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
Date: 3/17/2021 8:28:00 AM
I can feel the cold and see the shapes. A wonderful write. I have been reading many of your writes. All are wonderful. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 3/18/2021 12:18:00 PM
Hell oPaula, I feel the cold today, it is cold outside. it feels like it will snow. i hope i am wrong. enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
Date: 3/10/2021 6:37:00 PM
I love picturing this Darlene. Maybe one day we can walk together in some deep snow and talk and laugh.
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Date: 3/11/2021 5:58:00 AM
Hello Caren oh, I would like that. Hugs Darlene
Date: 2/28/2021 5:40:00 PM
Sometimes it is rather amazing how those shapes appeared on the newly fallen snow. Here's to less winter, more spring! Take good care, Darlene. :) gw
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Date: 3/1/2021 11:51:00 AM
Hello Gershon, Yes less winter hurry up Spring! I will . You do the same. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 2/28/2021 6:19:00 AM
You paint a pretty picture. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 2/28/2021 10:03:00 AM
Hello Richard, nice to see you. Thank you for the lovely comment. My imagination helped me this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 2/27/2021 1:07:00 PM
Those first prints of new snow! Wonderful wherever they come from!
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Date: 2/28/2021 10:05:00 AM
Hello Kim, I have no idea where the prints came from. Higs Darlene
Date: 2/27/2021 10:48:00 AM
Nice descriptive poem! Yes, ice crystals melt creating strange patterns, like the clouds create artistic patterns! All the best to you.
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Date: 2/27/2021 11:29:00 AM
Hello Kirsh, thank you. The patterns are so strange, you wonder how they got there in the first place in the deepest snow. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 2/26/2021 5:35:00 PM
Being in a country with lots of snow, I have experiences like you. Nature is mysterious and beautiful. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 2/27/2021 11:34:00 AM
Hello Mala, oh, then you know what I am referring to. These prints look like footprints and paw prints. Love /Darlene.
Date: 2/26/2021 10:53:00 AM
I see those shapes often and figure it could be a very small, light animal that made them. Spring is a very nice time of year. All sorts of things appear as the snow melts. Loved this Darlene. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/27/2021 11:36:00 AM
Hello Judy, yes Spring is a very nice time of the year. Everything is renewed. Yes all sorts of shapes appear in the snow. Thank you. God bless. Darlene.
Date: 2/24/2021 12:37:00 PM
- ... I've seen them. Darlene ... life is exciting and mysterious :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2021 12:56:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, Yes life is exciting and a mystery. Hugs Darlene . xx
Date: 2/24/2021 8:10:00 AM
This creates beautiful thoughts for me Darlene ! It is peaceful and serene. Happy Wednesday! Hope you've been well xxoo
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Date: 2/24/2021 9:59:00 AM
Hello Mike Gentile, thank you Mike. Happy Wednesday Mike. Yes I have ben keeping well. I hope you are to. xxxooo
Date: 2/23/2021 11:01:00 PM
Great scenery. Wish I could get a glimpse.
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Date: 2/24/2021 10:02:00 AM
Hello Victor, I see this often when the snow begins to melt. I always wonder where the prints came from. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 2/23/2021 3:31:00 PM
yes I've seen this phenomena too Darlene, very descriptive my friend:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/23/2021 3:50:00 PM
Hello Jan, I see them to and i wonder how they got there. It is deep snow where no one goes. So i wonder how they got therre. hugs Darlene
Date: 2/23/2021 3:10:00 PM
Darlene, very nice, I have seen those mystery footprints too _Constance
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Date: 2/23/2021 3:52:00 PM
Hello Constance, I am glad i am not the only one. it is strange ow they got there in the first place. enjoy your evening my friend.

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