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When the Shepherd Slept
There was a tired shepherd who fell asleep With no one else who could tend to his sheep The sheep were delighted, freedom in reach Followed the leader and away they sneaked. Frolicking sheep, each having fun galore Walking for miles over fields, hills and moors Then came the sunset and night became dim Slowly they realised freedom was grim. They grew hungry and went in search of food But couldn't find forage and became subdued It was difficult and the sheep couldn’t sleep As they were pursued by some ghastly beasts. So tired and weary they wished hopefully To be back in the sheep fold of safety They realised they need their shepherd's care For love, food and shelter that's always there. When the sheep had almost lost every hope A familiar face came over the slopes It was their shepherd and all ran with glee Euphoric he’d shown eventually. They vowed they'd never run away again It wasn’t worth the havoc, sorrow or pain Then the tired hungry sheep with baa baa bleats Thanked God for shepherds who watch o'er their sheep. *+*+* 24th February 2023 Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 3/12/2023 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write/picture. I love it. Have a blessed day/week...............
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Date: 3/12/2023 9:19:00 AM
Belle: A lovely story with wise lessons and a happy ending. A Perfect Nursery Rhyme. Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/6/2023 9:26:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely children's poem, Belle :) - hugs
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Date: 3/5/2023 6:39:00 AM
Ah Belle, this is truly inspired. So clever. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/4/2023 5:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Belle . Wonderful story. Eve.
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Date: 3/4/2023 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations on this winner in Eve's contest. Creative lines penned. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 3/3/2023 8:36:00 PM
I love how this just washed over me like a warm sense of calm as I read it! Just extremely kid friendly in the way it teaches well done. Blessings A.S.
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Date: 2/25/2023 1:57:00 AM
What a lovely nursery rhyme. Teaches a lesson too.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/3/2023 7:53:00 PM
Thank you very much Victor. Bless you, Belle
Date: 2/24/2023 8:42:00 PM
Simply beautiful, and with a moral too, great job, Belle:)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/24/2023 11:51:00 PM
Thank you very much Joe… Belle
Date: 2/24/2023 2:54:00 PM
Great story, Belle. Good luck! Have a great weekend:)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/24/2023 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Daniel, have a wonderful weekend too… Belle
Date: 2/24/2023 2:03:00 PM
Brilliant writing Belle, this belongs in a children's book. Hope things are well with you and Alan. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/24/2023 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Tom, I truly appreciate that. Alan is recovering slowly after his week in hospital… Belle

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