When the Last Petal Falls
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2/27/2025 for As The Last Petal Falls Poetry Contest sponsored by Sara Jama
How I remember our days of vibrant youth.
We coordinated as a team,
as together, we unfolded our dream
of beauty, love, and truth.
Now, when a comrade's, gone, these visions, it recalls,
and we reminisce, softening the blow -
but who will remember me, I would like to know -
when the last petal falls.
Copyright © David Crandall | Year Posted 2025
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