Winged Warrior Poet Monorhyme

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When the Heavens Fall-12x12

When the Heavens Fall

The devious despotic dark ones shall descend
Riding sullen stallions to this hell will attend
Bringing with them fire and fear, a ballistic blend
Rulers of Lords and Kings, tyranny will impend

The sun will stop shining, the darkness shall extend
The forsaken have fallen and thus set the trend
Shivering silence no human can comprehend
Lachrymal lashes through weeping walls shall transcend

Cathedrals of condemnation, priests will pretend
Impetuous entombment, Angels must defend
Disjunctive destruction the demons do contend
Illumination and damnation, battle's END.


MP3...The Four Horsemen...by Metallica



Jan.12.2017
12 by 12 Monorhyme - Contest
Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Mark Martin January 30, 2017 at 3:36 PM Apocalyptic masterpiece. Congratulations WW! :-)

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2017 at 8:03 PM wow, a very powerful one you got from this challenge. WELL DONE, Winged Warrior and great picture too.

Janis Medders Tobechi January 28, 2017 at 4:43 PM The four horsemen of the apocolypse and an intense monorhyme to follow, what an overwhelming write. Congrats on your placement.

Sandra Haight January 27, 2017 at 6:36 PM Winged Warrier, back to congratulate you on your fine placement in the contest for your awesome Monorhyme! Sandra

Eve Roper January 18, 2017 at 6:56 PM Very good, ^WW^, a winner already Hugs

Deborah Burch January 17, 2017 at 12:22 PM Awesome!! WW!!! I love it!! So smoothly Put together and you used 'good vocabulary'!! Best wishes for the contest!!! Big Hugggs!! Deb

Sandra Haight January 15, 2017 at 7:07 PM Winged Warrior...excellent meter and Monorhyme that present a dark, foreboding visual of 'when the heavens fall'. Best wishes for the contest! Sandra