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April- 10. 2025
Write Ten Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France
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“Unexpected wind and rain may come into our lives. But there’s hope that the downpour will wash away our soul’s dusty stains” ~ By Poet On a sunny day, as pedestrians moved along pavements, Rain pelted down all of a sudden, as a bolt from the blue. Men went scampering to places of shelter, not to get wet. Those who had umbrellas opened them over their heads, Looking like a sudden sprout of colourful mushrooms. Motorists pushed through traffic, honking horns. Droplets of rain, like soft satin touch, tickled the body. The intoxicating smell of petrichor rose from the earth. Leaves on trees were washed clean of all dust and dirt, And they were making a slow waltz in the passing wind.

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Date: 4/13/2025 8:11:00 PM
'Leaves on trees were washed clean of all dust and dirt' thats what we wait for, lovely write dear friend. Congratulations on your win dear poet.Cheers!!!
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Date: 4/13/2025 10:25:00 AM
- Back with a congrats on your winning poem, dear Valsa :) - hugs
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Date: 4/13/2025 8:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/quote and picture. We need rain. Send some this way.... Have a blessed day with your win...................
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Date: 4/13/2025 6:50:00 AM
Your poetry is lovely, dear Valsa :) — The multicolored fungus is appealing to me. Your poem is really moving, as if it had been composed from an intimate perspective. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/10/2025 10:26:00 AM
Nice poem welcoming rain.
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Date: 4/10/2025 6:18:00 AM
A refreshing summer rain? A gift from the Creator. Nice lines Valsa
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Date: 4/10/2025 2:29:00 AM
great scenery, is it monsoon time ? this is written like a true experience, very sensitive poem, enjoyed
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Date: 4/10/2025 1:02:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Valsa :) - I like the colourful mushrooms :) - In Norway we have a lot of rain in the summer... every day we hoped there would be a little sunshine - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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