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07/18/24

When Summer is Gone 

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Contest by Jcb Brul 

When Summer Is Gone

       Scorching Sun in severe Summer  brought draught with arid field.
        Rainy season followed, when cracked soil about to cry.      
         Roaring storm and floating clouds rushed and fought.
          Appeared showers when  Summer is gone.

           Loud thunderbolt, gust thrusts, cloud melts, rain showers.
            Plants bathe with branches, foliages.    
             Silky shiny leaves are kissed by rain drops.
             Glistening greenery embowers.
                Sun not sizzling, raindrops drizzling.
               Soil gets moistened, glossy green grass in mass.

           Flooded  damped ground .
           Football played wearing soggy  Jersey.
           Immersing one leg on muddy marshy land
            standing long - necked crane  to catch fish.
                
           Rain showers soothe when Summer is gone.
           Dry Nature gets blessings to relish.
             All around fine freshness sparkle.
           New love cheers, excites, entertains.,
           confusing amusing muse of lovers.
        Refused love blends in tears with ceaseless rains.
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Kendrick Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 2:03 PM
Congratulations on your winner in this very interesting contest. Way to go. Sara K
Woods Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 10:52 AM
Enjoyed reading about the joy of summer ending and another season bringing happiness! Xo
Daniel Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 6:13 AM
This is lovely, Anisha:)
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