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07/18/24

When Summer is Gone 

First Place

Contest by Jcb Brul 

Scorching Sun in severe Summer brought draught with arid field. Rainy season followed, when cracked soil about to cry. Roaring storm and floating clouds rushed and fought. Appeared showers when Summer is gone. Loud thunderbolt, gust thrusts, cloud melts, rain showers. Plants bathe with branches, foliages. Silky shiny leaves are kissed by rain drops. Glistening greenery embowers. Sun not sizzling, raindrops drizzling. Soil gets moistened, glossy green grass in mass. Flooded damped ground . Football played wearing soggy Jersey. Immersing one leg on muddy marshy land standing long - necked crane to catch fish. Rain showers soothe when Summer is gone. Dry Nature gets blessings to relish. All around fine freshness sparkle. New love cheers, excites, entertains., confusing amusing muse of lovers. Refused love blends in tears with ceaseless rains.

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Date: 8/5/2024 2:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your winner in this very interesting contest. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 7/27/2024 10:52:00 AM
Enjoyed reading about the joy of summer ending and another season bringing happiness! Xo
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Date: 7/25/2024 6:13:00 AM
This is lovely, Anisha:)
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