When Summer Is Gone

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07/18/24

When Summer is Gone

First Place

Contest by Jcb Brul

       Scorching Sun in severe Summer  brought draught with arid field.
        Rainy season followed, when cracked soil about to cry.      
         Roaring storm and floating clouds rushed and fought.
          Appeared showers when  Summer is gone.

           Loud thunderbolt, gust thrusts, cloud melts, rain showers.
            Plants bathe with branches, foliages.    
             Silky shiny leaves are kissed by rain drops.
             Glistening greenery embowers.
                Sun not sizzling, raindrops drizzling.
               Soil gets moistened, glossy green grass in mass.

           Flooded  damped ground .
           Football played wearing soggy  Jersey.
           Immersing one leg on muddy marshy land
            standing long - necked crane  to catch fish.
                
           Rain showers soothe when Summer is gone.
           Dry Nature gets blessings to relish.
             All around fine freshness sparkle.
           New love cheers, excites, entertains.,
           confusing amusing muse of lovers.
        Refused love blends in tears with ceaseless rains.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/5/2024 2:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your winner in this very interesting contest. Way to go. Sara K

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/27/2024 10:52:00 AM

Enjoyed reading about the joy of summer ending and another season bringing happiness! Xo

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/25/2024 6:13:00 AM

This is lovely, Anisha:)