When Summer Is Gone

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When summer is gone, its heart may grieve. The endless breadth of the leaden blue sky and daylight golden sunny rays weave fall days become shorter and unsettled. Temperature's cool sweet breath at play for a playground of dreams and ebullient smiles. No longer cute summer wear, but the warmer apparels embrace. Nights longer echoes sounds of star lights. The days slowly progress to winter earth canvas and shone through abandoned labyrinth patches. Flowers slowly feather out and die, while drawn trees undress and crisp foliage echo footstep of earthy brilliant warm hue colors; a pinwheel of yellow, orange, red, and brown start to claim and dominate the scene; a poet's inspiration.
7/18/2024

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Date: 8/8/2024 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your winner in this interesting contest. Way to go. I am delighted to see your name on the winners' list. Sara K
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Date: 8/7/2024 2:47:00 PM
A fav in my eyes, this was quite melodic to me. And with marvelous word illustrations that are above the uusual ones. I know your are proud of your prize piem, and you should be, Grazie, Panagiota
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Date: 7/25/2024 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. It is a wonderful write/time of the year. I like the fall better. Love your ending... So True.... Have a wonderful day writing away................
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Date: 7/24/2024 6:38:00 PM
You took me through the progression there from summer to fall. And so glad it ended, not with a thud, but inspirationally! Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 7/21/2024 9:40:00 AM
Many love summer. Not I. It's too hot here. But I can understand how lovely summer can be as when I was young, I used to swim a lot. Not in my old age though.
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Date: 7/21/2024 5:44:00 AM
Gorgeous penning, Eve. I'm always a little sad when summer ends, but I also love autumn. xox
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Date: 7/19/2024 7:03:00 PM
Awwww... love those two last lines most of all. What an ending! I also liked the pinwheel of colour. Good luck in the contest, dear.
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Date: 7/19/2024 3:38:00 AM
what wonderful imagery of the change of seasons and I love the use of personification Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/18/2024 10:12:00 PM
So very true, Eve, really beautiful write:)
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