When Summer Is Gone

When summer is gone
  I’ll cling to her last       sunbeam
    bask in the warmth of her eyes
      and smell deeply the roses of her bloom. 

When summer is gone
  I’ll hear the music she had played
    with      endless passion     in her voice
      her slender fingers found notes
        that pierced my soul. 

When summer is gone
  I’ll see her run through the waves
    laughing at the crazy seagulls
      hopping over beach towels
        wet and tossed 
              like scattered     memories.    

When summer is gone
  I’ll cry for her with a heavy heart
    realizing she is really      gone
      and I’ll ache inside with a deep longing
         to cling to her     again     once more 

                 when summer is gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Carmack Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 3:14 AM
My condolences for the loss of your sister. Revelation 21:4 has given me some comfort in times of loss. I don't know how he is going to do that, but I just trust that he will. Loved your poem, especially the third stanza.
Leiser Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 8:25 PM
Thank you for your kind hearted words and verse, Rob. I appreciate you stopping by to comment!
Cornish Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 4:52 AM
Laura, this hits me hard with it's poignancy in your heart and especially since I'm with my Mom who is failing (she's 94) - these loves in life we've "sort-of" always taken for granted...but as we get older ourselves, not so much anymore, so like the seasons---we live - on to the next - LOVE this write like all that you share!
Leiser Avatar
September 6, 2024 at 2:53 PM
Thank you, Craig, for your kind and encouraging comments regarding this poem. I shared this one at my sister’s memorial service recently. I truly love your poetry, as well! Hugs! Laura :)
Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 2:04 PM
Congratulations on your winner in this contest. Way to go. I was delighted to see your name in the list. Sara K
Leiser Avatar
August 14, 2024 at 4:00 PM
Thank you, Sarah! :)
Radice Avatar
August 3, 2024 at 8:47 AM
Touching and so beautiful Laura. A true poet’s poem written with a real depth of emotion. Cheers - Gary
Leiser Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 9:58 PM
Thank you for your kind comment, Gary. I appreciate you stopping by! :)
Daniel Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 6:00 AM
So beautiful, Laura:)
Leiser Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Thank you, Joanna. I appreciate you stopping by to comment :)
Junaid Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 3:07 AM
how incredibly beautiful and heart touching. i'm very sorry for your loss and i hope you find your sister in heaven, Laura. Hugs, Hiba <3
Leiser Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 9:42 AM
Thank you, Hiba! I appreciate your kind condolences :)
Buhagiar Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 8:54 PM
This poem is so well constructed and evocative. The repetitive line gives it strength. The imagery is fabulous. If it is for some contest, I wish you the best. You deserve it.
Leiser Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 9:42 AM
Thank you, Victor! Your kind comments mean a lot to me! :)
Manassian Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 9:44 PM
Loved this piece. What beautiful imagery! Wet and tossed like scattered memories. Pure genius. Loved this personification. Hope you are well.
Manassian Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 3:27 PM
Losing a loved one is so very painful. I know. May God continue to comfort and uphold you. Thankfully, we have the hope of seeing them again one day.
Leiser Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 3:21 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by with your kind comments, Eileen! This is also about my sister, who recently passed away. Take care and God bless! :)
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