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7/15/2024 for When summer is gone Poetry Contest sponsored by Jcb Brul

When Summer is Gone

I intend to enjoy summer
and the sun, warming my ancient skin.
Once, I said goodbye to summer
because one season must yield to the next,
and it was time to attend school and learn.
I said goodbye to seemingly endless beach days,
crashing waves, sand crabs, frisbees, hot dogs, and portable radios singing
about suntanned California girls;
lazy mornings, bike rides to the ballpark,
and balls, flying off my bat and over walls.
I said goodbye,
as I said goodbye
to the excitement of youthful romance,
to my son's childhood,
and as I will say goodbye,
one day, to you,
dear friend.
I intend to enjoy summer.
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Kendrick Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 7:22 AM
Congratulations on your poem being on the winners' list. Way to go. Great to see it there. Sara K
Crandall Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 7:51 AM
Thanks Sara!
Woods Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 8:49 AM
How sad... good bye must always be so sad! Your words lift up and let down easy... being moved at all by words is such a gift, thank u! Xo
Crandall Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 9:13 AM
Thanks Crystol, life seems to have a bittersweet quality. Every hello eventually has a goodbye. Maybe it's like that song Hello Goodbye, better to focus on the hellos :-)
Narain Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 9:57 AM
Nice poem.
Crandall Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 12:53 PM
Thanks Jay!
Rodgers Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 8:24 AM
Hello David, I have to smile for yours is the third poem I read today about summer ending and enjoying the days. A great poem to keep me in the moment and the season of summer. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Crandall Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 8:27 AM
Thanks Daniel - I'll have to check out some of the others.
Greenhough Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 7:53 PM
Your childhood adventures sound dreamy. I enjoy this memorable poem.
Crandall Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 9:03 PM
Glad you enjoyed, Hilda!
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