When Stars Haunt

Where far fails to name the distance,
I saw your tender glance
in the darkest hours of night.

Your flickering eyes.. ever so bright..
hung softly
in the quiet folds of nature’s canvas.

I remember those eyes that followed me,
flashing silent heartbeats of love,
then haunting me
amid the mourning whiteness of death.

When this land turns foreign to me,
I will cross the distance back
for you..
for the eyes I lost.

You will come with me, I am sure,
and together we will lean
from the edge of the night sky,
looking down at what we missed.

Then we will lend our light
to souls stranded
at the darkest crossroads..
brighten their faces, just a little,
if they search
for distant hope,
enough light for someone to keep going.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
February 8, 2026 at 7:49 PM
"Then we will lend our light to souls stranded at the darkest crossroads.." Beautiful thoughts on looking at the firmament on a star lit sky. Giving a little light to those stranded in life should be our mission. The analogy of stars to the eyes of your lady love is so pleasing. A lovely poem.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 10:57 AM
What would we do without our eyes? Happy New Year.
Somadas Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 11:35 PM
Happy New Year Victor..
Wolf Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 8:05 PM
The eyes have it, or so they say... I really like this one, Jenish... Merry, Happy, and Peaceful Holidays, Gershon
Somadas Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 2:48 AM
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year in advance Gershon..
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