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When Stars Come Out To Play

When stars come out to play at night and up above the moon is bright, the darkness cloaks the light of day as shadows in the darkness sway like silhouettes in pale moon light. The hearts of lovers soon excite as passions tempted with delight; they come together quite risqué when stars come out to play. And as they hold each other tight the flames of fervor will ignite desires from deep within that prey and light the night with their soiree, and then the dance of love takes flight when stars come out to play. November 21, 2021

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Date: 1/20/2022 5:52:00 PM
wonderful meter and beautiful content John
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/20/2022 7:47:00 PM
Thanks, David, I appreciate your thoughts and comments.
Date: 12/5/2021 6:55:00 AM
John, this is outstanding, superb poetry refined and so suggestively enchantingly romantic, enough to arouse ones desires. Well penned dear friend, hugs, blessings, Jennifer
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/5/2021 7:05:00 AM
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and comments, Jenn, I'm glad you enjoyed my playful little Rondeau. I hope you and your family have a wonderful holiday season. Hugs, John
Date: 11/25/2021 9:49:00 AM
Romantic and beautiful John. I wish you a lovely Thanksgiving. One of the things I am thankful for is poetry like this! Blessings xxoo
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/25/2021 12:10:00 PM
Thank you so much for the sweet comment, Connie, I am thankful for you and all my PS friends. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours. Hugs from Texas, John
Date: 11/22/2021 5:17:00 PM
Utterly beautiful...
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/22/2021 5:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Shirley, I appreciate it. John
Date: 11/22/2021 4:32:00 AM
Oh oh... so beautiful - I LOVE THIS. Awesome writing. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/22/2021 6:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gina, I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours. Hugs, John
Date: 11/21/2021 10:11:00 PM
Excellent Rondeau, John. Enjoyed the read. A poet friend, Bill
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/22/2021 6:57:00 AM
Thanks so much, Bill, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family. John
Date: 11/21/2021 9:55:00 PM
Dear John, your romantic pen spills with sensual imagery embraced in rhythmic rhymes. Indeed, playful passion ignites the poetic page in rich and risqué ways "when stars come out to play". Exquisite, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/22/2021 6:55:00 AM
Dear Susan, thank you so much for taking the time to read my poetry. I always appreciate your wonderful comments. I'm glad you enjoyed my playful little poem. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours. Hugs, John
Date: 11/21/2021 1:06:00 PM
"When stars come out to play, they come together quite risqué" Oh my ! This is a beautiful and dreamy thought, so exciting and inviting. Your words take my breath away. I'm smiling and blushing, all at the same time. Simply breathtaking, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/22/2021 6:51:00 AM
Oh my, my words left you breathless :) Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Brandy, I appreciate your support so much. Hugs, John
Date: 11/21/2021 9:52:00 AM
I love this fun, beautiful poem. Well written John :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/21/2021 11:44:00 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John

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