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When Stars Appear

Following acts of terror rapt within their spell volunteers move in concert kindness starts to swell. Amidst deeds so heartless passersby watch stars appear while cursing the darkness. Citizens forget themselves show community assist as first responders deal with tragedy. Amidst deeds so heartless passersby watch stars appear while cursing the darkness. Sensing splendor on the wing, hands and feet reveal wise steps worth remembering eyes and ears of steel. Amidst deeds so heartless passersby watch stars appear while cursing the darkness. written below 4/28/2013, revised above 7/2/2021 Contest: Seguidilla Sponsored by: William Kekaula original winning sequidilla below Stars Appear Following acts of terror rapt within their spell volunteers move in concert kindness starts to swell. midst deeds so heartless passersby watch stars appear cursing the darkness.

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/10/2021 5:24:00 PM

The light of goodness will certainly drive away the shadows of turmoil, this is riveting! Congratulations on your win~

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 7/16/2021 10:01:00 AM

thank you, Michelle; "riveting" what a compliment. I appreciate your encouragement.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/9/2021 10:02:00 PM

In this bad world good people do exist. Congratulations on your well deserved win

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 7/16/2021 9:56:00 AM

I welcome your response with open arms. It seems they are largely unsung heroes which makes them even more necessary and appreciated. Thanks.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/9/2021 8:41:00 PM

Beautiful creation. Congratulations!

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 7/16/2021 9:58:00 AM

Glad you found it so...it is a trait of some people who unwrap themselves from their own turmoil and trash and become a gift of hope and help for those in need.

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/9/2021 8:25:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this wise observation... expressed in your awesome reality-marked poetic style. God bless you.

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 7/16/2021 10:00:00 AM

thank you, Beata. I appreciate your time and energy to leave a positive comment which makes my day, a week later. I pray a return God's blessing on you and yours.

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/9/2021 4:45:00 PM

A heart-wrenching scene materializes and care mingles thereafter, albeit, ugliness festers. Thank you, Reason, for your participation and your honorable placement my friend, Aloha!

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 7/9/2021 8:19:00 PM

My thanks to you, William, for your encouraging reply and for the placement in your contest. We have many such volunteers who shine through the darkness of our sometimes ugly world.