When Souls Spark True Love

She loves you more
I see it soar.
You might be friends
there is no ends
when it comes to 
two souls spark true.

When the warm sun
ebbs, the night won;
stars in full bloom
dressed the dark groom. 

The world could give 
some time to live. 

Her soft eyes rise
to see the skies
light up while you
drew her close to 
waltz the last dance.

A thought, a glance
flames of true love.

You gave a shove
and kissed her hard
a heart of guard
a taste of sweet 
fruit as lips meet.

Wisp sounds and lights 
through days and nights 
caught up in dreams
my own soft streams
as you lie by 
my side and tie
our breath as one. 
The sky we won.

2/3/2018

one syllable word 4 words per line

Poetry Contest:'Love Poem-Rhyme Only' 
Sponsored by:	Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 5:41 PM
Back with more deserved congrats, Eve.
Wigley Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 2:10 PM
Tricky style well executed, Eve. Congrats! Viv
Cunningham Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 10:33 AM
Congratulations Eve Tom.
Scars Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 10:30 AM
beautifully expressed sweet Eve...lovely word of true love, thank you and congrats :) -luloo
Acrich Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Very nice have you ever read RUMI his poems were about love and nothing else he is the #1 seller of poems https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X-idP23bHCg&t=2230s
Roper Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 10:26 AM
I am going to save this one
Barden Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 10:40 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Eve - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
Ashley Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 8:17 PM
A wonderfully romantic and sensual poem dear Eve. Congratulations on your brilliant win with this beautiful write. Warmest wishes and hugs ~Susan
Gondolf Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 5:02 AM
Nicely written, Eve, congrats on your win. John
Babu Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 11:31 AM
Many Congrats Eve on this WIN.......A sweet poem. Regards, Sathya
Gupta Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, Eve ...
Pett Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 6:10 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve, beautifully written, a joy to read. :))
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 12:53 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 7:37 PM
Big congrats, Eve. I see the winners' list is showing . Hurry and enter your best poem from last year. THAT contest is filling quadruple the speed of this one you won!!
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 7:37 PM
No, I'd say eight or ten times faster@!!
Haight Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 7:16 PM
Beautifully written, Eve. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 6:35 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Eve.
One Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 3:55 PM
SEnsual and romantic Eve.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 7:45 PM
WEll done, I am sure this will be on the winner list. I am feeling sad that I wanted to work on it today, but now it's too late!
Gauthier Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Beautiful, Eve. Well executed - GL.
Pandit Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 6:50 AM
I like how you wrote this, Eve..each stanza is a unbroken line of thought..well done given the constraints..a winning poem.
Michael Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 5:18 AM
A really lovely moment of romance...All the best Eve
Vaso Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 2:09 AM
I simply loved this eve! Hugs!
Gupta Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 12:19 AM
A creative image in 'fruit as lips meet ... A wonderful four worded thirty two lines, Eve ... is going to secure a high ...
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