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When Souls Spark True Love

She loves you more I see it soar. You might be friends there is no ends when it comes to two souls spark true. When the warm sun ebbs, the night won; stars in full bloom dressed the dark groom. The world could give some time to live. Her soft eyes rise to see the skies light up while you drew her close to waltz the last dance. A thought, a glance flames of true love. You gave a shove and kissed her hard a heart of guard a taste of sweet fruit as lips meet. Wisp sounds and lights through days and nights caught up in dreams my own soft streams as you lie by my side and tie our breath as one. The sky we won. 2/3/2018 one syllable word 4 words per line Poetry Contest:'Love Poem-Rhyme Only' Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 2/24/2018 5:41:00 PM
Back with more deserved congrats, Eve.
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Date: 2/24/2018 2:10:00 PM
Tricky style well executed, Eve. Congrats! Viv
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Date: 2/23/2018 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations Eve Tom.
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Date: 2/23/2018 10:30:00 AM
beautifully expressed sweet Eve...lovely word of true love, thank you and congrats :) -luloo
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Date: 2/18/2018 10:20:00 AM
Very nice have you ever read RUMI his poems were about love and nothing else he is the #1 seller of poems https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X-idP23bHCg&t=2230s
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Date: 2/18/2018 10:26:00 AM
I am going to save this one
Date: 2/15/2018 10:40:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Eve - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
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Date: 2/6/2018 8:17:00 PM
A wonderfully romantic and sensual poem dear Eve. Congratulations on your brilliant win with this beautiful write. Warmest wishes and hugs ~Susan
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Date: 2/6/2018 5:02:00 AM
Nicely written, Eve, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 2/5/2018 11:31:00 AM
Many Congrats Eve on this WIN.......A sweet poem. Regards, Sathya
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Date: 2/5/2018 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, Eve ...
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Date: 2/5/2018 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve, beautifully written, a joy to read. :))
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Date: 2/5/2018 12:53:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your win.
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Date: 2/4/2018 7:37:00 PM
Big congrats, Eve. I see the winners' list is showing . Hurry and enter your best poem from last year. THAT contest is filling quadruple the speed of this one you won!!
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Date: 2/4/2018 7:37:00 PM
No, I'd say eight or ten times faster@!!
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Date: 2/4/2018 7:16:00 PM
Beautifully written, Eve. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/4/2018 6:35:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Eve.
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Date: 2/4/2018 3:55:00 PM
SEnsual and romantic Eve.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/3/2018 7:45:00 PM
WEll done, I am sure this will be on the winner list. I am feeling sad that I wanted to work on it today, but now it's too late!
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Date: 2/3/2018 8:44:00 AM
Beautiful, Eve. Well executed - GL.
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Date: 2/3/2018 6:50:00 AM
I like how you wrote this, Eve..each stanza is a unbroken line of thought..well done given the constraints..a winning poem.
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Date: 2/3/2018 5:18:00 AM
A really lovely moment of romance...All the best Eve
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Date: 2/3/2018 2:09:00 AM
I simply loved this eve! Hugs!
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Date: 2/3/2018 12:19:00 AM
A creative image in 'fruit as lips meet ... A wonderful four worded thirty two lines, Eve ... is going to secure a high ...
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