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When She Walks


my attention caught
naked, bare without a care 
when she walks I'm thralled 
witnessing gravity speak
she winks, I glimpse, we are one




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Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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James Peranteau

April 21, 2015 at 9:02 PM

Fantastic dear poet ! I so love the terse here, you filled my thoughts and spilled very little ! Awesome James ! Have a wonderful week my friend...............much love, james....Ps...it's me reading another that caught mine eye

April 25, 2015 at 12:28 PM

Hiya James, I'm smiling widely that you've popped by. Mega hugs to Noah and you dear Sir, hugs//James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 20, 2015 at 5:58 AM

Huge one, weeeee that's one playful move.. :)! the scene is cute i like the 4th line best.. :D!//olive eloisa

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 21, 2015 at 9:19 AM

winks!! :D! hugs back!

April 20, 2015 at 2:15 PM

Hey little one, words from a wandering mind, maybe one day he'll find. Oh my, the 4th line, warm hugs//Dino James xxx

April 19, 2015 at 9:52 PM

Nice. Who is naked she or you? Naked gals winking , seems you have a wonderful problem my friend..lol A7, great Tanka....

April 20, 2015 at 2:09 PM

I wish Robert, I wish. Blessed Monday to you and yours, your Scottish poetry friend, James :)

April 19, 2015 at 7:13 PM

Wonderful as always, my Scottish friend

April 20, 2015 at 1:55 PM

A few words thrown together, but if I was really to tell, I'd surely be severed, smiles, James :) :)

April 19, 2015 at 4:14 PM

Lovely, light poem. A fresh breath of air!

April 20, 2015 at 1:49 PM

Thank you kindly Anna, glad you enjoyed this short piece, smiles, James :) :)

April 19, 2015 at 2:43 PM

aww cute one James and that's not just the poem lol:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

April 20, 2015 at 1:33 PM

Thank you kindly Jan, cute indeed ;-) hugs//James xxx

April 19, 2015 at 2:38 PM

Very nice tanka James..alluring and passionate... Watching the one you love...spectacular Tim

April 20, 2015 at 1:27 PM

Ones wandering mind in passionate say Tim. Thanks kindly for your visits, always appreciated, James :)

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