When She Walks

my attention caught naked, bare without a care when she walks I'm thralled witnessing gravity speak she winks, I glimpse, we are one .

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Date: 4/21/2015 9:02:00 PM
Fantastic dear poet ! I so love the terse here, you filled my thoughts and spilled very little ! Awesome James ! Have a wonderful week my friend...............much love, james....Ps...it's me reading another that caught mine eye
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James Fraser
Date: 4/25/2015 12:28:00 PM
Hiya James, I'm smiling widely that you've popped by. Mega hugs to Noah and you dear Sir, hugs//James :) :)
Date: 4/20/2015 5:58:00 AM
Huge one, weeeee that's one playful move.. :)! the scene is cute i like the 4th line best.. :D!//olive eloisa
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Date: 4/21/2015 9:19:00 AM
winks!! :D! hugs back!
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James Fraser
Date: 4/20/2015 2:15:00 PM
Hey little one, words from a wandering mind, maybe one day he'll find. Oh my, the 4th line, warm hugs//Dino James xxx
Date: 4/19/2015 9:52:00 PM
Nice. Who is naked she or you? Naked gals winking , seems you have a wonderful problem my friend..lol A7, great Tanka....
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James Fraser
Date: 4/20/2015 2:09:00 PM
I wish Robert, I wish. Blessed Monday to you and yours, your Scottish poetry friend, James :)
Date: 4/19/2015 7:13:00 PM
Wonderful as always, my Scottish friend
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James Fraser
Date: 4/20/2015 1:55:00 PM
A few words thrown together, but if I was really to tell, I'd surely be severed, smiles, James :) :)
Date: 4/19/2015 4:14:00 PM
Lovely, light poem. A fresh breath of air!
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James Fraser
Date: 4/20/2015 1:49:00 PM
Thank you kindly Anna, glad you enjoyed this short piece, smiles, James :) :)
Date: 4/19/2015 2:43:00 PM
aww cute one James and that's not just the poem lol:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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James Fraser
Date: 4/20/2015 1:33:00 PM
Thank you kindly Jan, cute indeed ;-) hugs//James xxx
Date: 4/19/2015 2:38:00 PM
Very nice tanka James..alluring and passionate... Watching the one you love...spectacular Tim
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James Fraser
Date: 4/20/2015 1:27:00 PM
Ones wandering mind in passionate say Tim. Thanks kindly for your visits, always appreciated, James :)
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