When She Heats, Boils and Bubbles

when she heats, boils, bubbles, then we got real troubles 
braised evil perfection, ...matron of deflection
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Bowring Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 1:40 PM
Dear Rose, this is a brilliantly written Alexandrine. It’s fun getting into the spirit ( excusing the pun) of things isn’t it and you certainly are with this cleverly crafted poem. Love the title too! She doesn’t sound a very nice witch. Great rhyming. I’ve never tried this form but yours is inspiring. Thank you. Hugs and smiles to you. Xx :):)
One Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 10:10 AM
DAmn she sounds really evil! Great one for the contest..
Anaya Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 10:29 AM
Wickedness insures, oh I love this perspective of the witch, very clever and scary, Mystic Rose. Good day!
Rose  Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 3:32 PM
Thank you for reading and taking time to comment Anaya, much appreciated :)
Ray Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 9:25 AM
ahhh the jaundiced eye knows well the wrath of woman....very illuminating and well done....
Rose  Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 3:32 PM
Thanks for reading Timothy, y our comments are always a welcome moment of happiness :)
Empress Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Brilliant alexandrine, love your choice of rhymes and how well you’ve written this. Sweet Rose you amaze me with your poetic skills and ability to nail any form and theme just effortlessly, is beyond impressive, and leaves me in awe always! So fitting for the theme this is! Loved reading this.
Rose  Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 3:31 PM
Your so kind with your comments, you make me smile each time I read one. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 6:52 AM
When will we three meet again> It will be more than trouble. Lovely Halloween. Blessings
Rose  Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 3:31 PM
I try and stay away from trouble Victor but when it comes to Halloween a little fun write is always good. Thanks for reading my friend :)
Sharma  Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 6:44 AM
Woah, this is giving me savage vibes! So powerfully conveyed with amazing word choices, dear Rose.. Messing up with her, is calling for real trouble.. How phenomenal is this, so much strength.. "braised evil perfection, ...matron of deflection" I love it, brilliant alexandrine poem..
Rose  Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 3:30 PM
Thank you so much Hiya, getting in the spirit of things lol,
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