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When She Heats, Boils and Bubbles

when she heats, boils, bubbles, then we got real troubles braised evil perfection, ...matron of deflection

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/21/2023 3:14:00 PM

reminds me of one of the three witches in Macbeth. :-) She sounds evil. A great Alexandrine. Best wishes with the contest, enjoy Saturday, Sara

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/21/2023 1:40:00 PM

Dear Rose, this is a brilliantly written Alexandrine. It’s fun getting into the spirit ( excusing the pun) of things isn’t it and you certainly are with this cleverly crafted poem. Love the title too! She doesn’t sound a very nice witch. Great rhyming. I’ve never tried this form but yours is inspiring. Thank you. Hugs and smiles to you. Xx :):)

Silent One

Date: 10/21/2023 10:10:00 AM

DAmn she sounds really evil! Great one for the contest..

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/20/2023 10:29:00 AM

Wickedness insures, oh I love this perspective of the witch, very clever and scary, Mystic Rose. Good day!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/20/2023 3:32:00 PM

Thank you for reading and taking time to comment Anaya, much appreciated :)

Timothy Ray

Date: 10/20/2023 9:25:00 AM

ahhh the jaundiced eye knows well the wrath of woman....very illuminating and well done....

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/20/2023 3:32:00 PM

Thanks for reading Timothy, y our comments are always a welcome moment of happiness :)

Ink Empress

Date: 10/20/2023 7:29:00 AM

Brilliant alexandrine, love your choice of rhymes and how well you’ve written this. Sweet Rose you amaze me with your poetic skills and ability to nail any form and theme just effortlessly, is beyond impressive, and leaves me in awe always! So fitting for the theme this is! Loved reading this.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/20/2023 3:31:00 PM

Your so kind with your comments, you make me smile each time I read one. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/20/2023 6:52:00 AM

When will we three meet again> It will be more than trouble. Lovely Halloween. Blessings

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/20/2023 3:31:00 PM

I try and stay away from trouble Victor but when it comes to Halloween a little fun write is always good. Thanks for reading my friend :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/20/2023 6:44:00 AM

Woah, this is giving me savage vibes! So powerfully conveyed with amazing word choices, dear Rose.. Messing up with her, is calling for real trouble.. How phenomenal is this, so much strength.. "braised evil perfection, ...matron of deflection" I love it, brilliant alexandrine poem..

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/20/2023 3:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Hiya, getting in the spirit of things lol,