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When Raindrops Fall

Pitter patter on rain polished pavements Tears straggling down window panes The rattle of ricocheting raindrops on galvanised rooftops Spiralling eddies in bull's eye puddles Umbrellas ,shields fending off the sharpness Of blasts of non-stop water bullets Insidiously a soft drizzle penetrates Right through to the skin Producing shivery limbs And chattering teeth Transformed by the sun into glittering diamonds Which disappear with the welcome arc of the rainbow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 7/14/2024 10:45:00 PM
Very powerful and flowery words are beautifully used. Congratulations!
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Denis Bruce
Date: 7/16/2024 7:14:00 AM
Alex,you are so kind with your comments. Thank you
Date: 7/14/2024 9:45:00 PM
'Producing shivery limbs And chattering teeth'! beautiful poem, happy writing, congratulations dear poet.
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Denis Bruce
Date: 7/16/2024 7:16:00 AM
I am always delighted when a reader findsenjoyable lines in my poetic offerings
Date: 7/14/2024 10:14:00 AM
The good, the bad, and the ugly of rain fall! But always a promise to cleanse the pallet! Xo
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Denis Bruce
Date: 7/16/2024 7:19:00 AM
Crystol, thank you for recognising the spectrum of rainfall visualised in this poetic submission
Date: 6/25/2024 9:47:00 AM
Hello Denis Bruce, i like to listen to the raindrops fall. the sound of the raindrops on the window pane is like bacon frying in the frying pan. It is a soothing sound. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene//
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/25/2024 3:09:00 PM
Hello Denis Bruce, Oh, so do i. I treat myself to bacon once in a while. For breakfast or lunch. Enjoyyour evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Denis Bruce
Date: 6/25/2024 2:22:00 PM
It is so kind of you,Darlene,to take the time to read my humble offerings. Rather than the sound of bacon frying,I just love its aroma

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