When Push Came To Shove

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he looked at the unknown square in the face and just said bring it on AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on October 27, 2022

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/27/2022 2:31:00 PM

I like this a lot, Line. You can see the determination in his jaw with his teeth clinched.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/27/2022 5:58:00 PM

Thank you very much, Milton ~

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/27/2022 1:28:00 PM

well said, line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/27/2022 5:58:00 PM

Thanks, Ilene ~

Sand Blown

Date: 10/27/2022 12:17:00 PM

...(p-u-s-h <--> s, h, o, v, e) ----> she pushes hope...so he hushes 'shhhush- up' shoves.........stans sand

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/27/2022 5:58:00 PM

Humm ~ had not seen it that way, Stans

Eve Roper

Date: 10/27/2022 11:06:00 AM

Well said. Many blessings to you my friend and wishes come true.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/27/2022 5:59:00 PM

Thank you very much, Eve ~