When Percy Flops

Percy the peacock flaunts his colored tail, Spreading gold wings like a Japanese fan To excite a mate, a future peahen Along the hall where children watch him sail. Once, thrice, Percy struts a handsome display With eyes blue, he looks around for a pick. And ladies murmur of avian topic; While they form a circle nearing his way. The prettiest one robed in aqua-green Shows interest while Percy loudly drools, That flappers open acting super cool! Brilliant her poise, tall as he, and serene. Ready to capture his one, perfect bride Wham! Percy flops on the hall’s wet cement. An honest proposal almost denied, But maiden takes the chance, how heaven sent! Animals Alive Contest of Carol Eastman 7/18/2014 nette onclaud
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July 29, 2014 at 1:03 PM
Nette, Congratulations, on your awesome win.... Love Linda
Nance Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 1:01 PM
Terrific! grats on your win sweetie
Devonshire Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Aww, wish Percy didn't have to propose from heaven. This is very cute, Nette. Congrats on your win!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 7:30 AM
Wow a beautiful write Nette,, big congrats!
Chutani Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 1:54 AM
peacocks and peahens are so interesting to watch play with each. congrats nette. Mohan
Mehta Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 10:02 PM
Very cutie,witty and pretty write, nette. Congrats
Smith Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 9:05 PM
Congrats on a great win, dear Nette... Hugs.. Arlene
Callus Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 5:43 PM
Quite witty, Nette:) poor percy peacock's pretty proposal! Congrats on a deserved win. // paul
Lindley Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 11:21 PM
Imaged filled write. A very colorful and witty write so well crafted my friend! BBravo!!!
W Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 11:05 PM
This woman is hard-to- get! Very entertaining and cleverly written.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 1:48 AM
Awesome write netty,, such minor things should be kept at bay in pure love n passion,,in my opinion she shud review// upma//
Ongado Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 4:32 PM
What a blooper for a proud peacock. The girl must have been turned off. A delightful poem like this does not come often, Nette. Brings out the kid in me, funny!
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 3:32 PM
I would hope that she overlooks his little flop and still becomes his bride..If she can't overlook a minor incident she wasn't meant for him...wonderful story nette...hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 3:15 PM
stunning bird and stunning write. Hugs jan xxxx
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