When Pealed the Bells

We all did cry when Father died, when pealed the bells
Landscape weary, our eyes teary, the earth stood still
Life bereft of meaning, withered plain of empty shells

Mourners came from nearby towns and far-flung dells
Haunting eulogies, by a lonely gravestone on a hill
We all did cry when Father died, when pealed the bells

Mom broke down, wept in her gown; she wasn't well
Her life's love stolen, it took a toll on her good will
Life bereft of meaning, withered plain of empty shells

Brother Skip, his lip he bit, emotions quelled
Took his cap off, sadly doffed, his blood now chilled
We all did cry when Father died, when pealed the bells

As for me --Long I wept, heart windswept, at this death knell
Against my will, my protests shrill, an all-too-bitter pill
Life bereft of meaning, withered plain of empty shells

As we shoveled the dirt, our souls hurt, a giant felled
Rain began to fall, soaked us all, each drop so shrill
We all did cry when Father died, when pealed the bells
Life bereft of meaning, withered plain of empty shells
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 10:55 AM
A villanelle is difficult to do. You made this seem like it was done with ease my friend.
Wolf Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 11:12 AM
Appearances can be deceiving. It took me much longer than usual to finish this villanelle, but the result seems to be pleasing. Thank you for the feedback, my friend. Best wishes, gw
Adams Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 8:49 PM
I admire a good villanelle, I have only written one or two and not an easy task! This one even though laced with sadness rocks :). Hugs
Wolf Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 9:14 PM
Your candid feedback is most appreciated. I very much agree with you: These villanelle's are not so easy to do. Thank you for your kind words, Sandra. :) gw
Mchattie Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 8:02 PM
Lovely poem Gershon. All of us face this crisis sooner or later. Fine tribute to your father.You're a rhyming machine my friend. Have a great day.
Wolf Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 8:06 PM
David, appreciate your kind words...You know, I've been called many things by many people: 'Rhyming machine' is one of the nicest appellations ever. Peace and Joy, Gershon
Sands Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 5:51 PM
Excellent Villanelle Gershon. I can feel it and you found the words to express everything in this challenging form of poem. Well written! :)
Wolf Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 8:01 PM
Thank you so much for your generous praise of this villanelle, Heidi. Appreciate your support. Best wishes, Gershon
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