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When Our Eyes First Met a Collaboration With Susan Ashley

When our eyes first met, in an evening's glow of twilight the moon was rising, the world disappeared I saw only you we enjoyed a calm merriment as love's breath crossed the unmeasurable distance where we found a glistening glimmer of sensual glint no words were spoken, none were needed your eyes invited an enduring treasured moment of created memory which will last through the harvest of our day's sweet nectared blossoms and light the dim-lit nights of entangled romantic interludes of welcomed fervor wrapped in the wondrous arms of wonder found in the silhouette of lovers painted in the moon-lit dark where our souls reveal their ambrosia, without fear in love's timeless universe of warm adoring realms of restive emotion found in the eyes of paradise from our first greeting when our eyes first met sundown raised a golden toast to star-shows lovesome muse vesper's champagne goosebumped in our veins and filled a vacant streambed with a shifted stream a plenished ribbon tying the juicy bow of our dewy dream as sparks rained down we fell like two falling stars showered in the shimmer of our dark-sky eyes ready for the heady rush we rushed headlong tipsy on the musk of jasmine air a flower tucked behind one ear petal-soft lips in search of honey sips with readiness flaunted like an arched red bloom as shadows supple like summer vines seized the Venus light costly the mossy mat beneath our sleek backs while the phlox moon blushed a pinkened swoon with our surrender when our eyes first met west of sunset the evening-star star dusted our gaze I saw only you as rainbow seasons whirl into December's pearl hair once raven long since faded to dove vintage heartbeats called in the past of the hourglass tipping the balance in the fatality of time yet-the old night hangs a Yule moon as full as my arms are of you-still- I see only you 8/27/21 Thank you, dear poet, dear friend, Susan for the beauty of your words, the beauty of your heart both hold me in awe, I am truly inspired by your skill...Frederic

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Date: 9/5/2021 6:30:00 PM
Lovely imagery and romantic! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 8/31/2021 2:13:00 AM
- A beautiful co-writing, Frederic and Susan :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:04:00 AM
thank you, Sunshine your kindness is appreciated
Date: 8/30/2021 3:27:00 AM
Congrats on POTD. God bless you. Love, GIna
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:05:00 AM
thank you, Regina your kind remark is appreciated
Date: 8/30/2021 1:28:00 AM
A most beautiful collaboration Frederic and Susan, romantic devotion, poetry in motion. Congratulations to you both on poem of the day… Belle
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:06:00 AM
thank you, Belle for your kindness
Date: 8/29/2021 7:02:00 PM
"No words were spoken, none were needed" Because love is so powerful. This is so beautiful and tender, filled with the right amount of passion and sensuality. Oh my ! You both have created a Masterpiece. Congratulations Frederic and Susan, on this magical collaboration and on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:07:00 AM
thank you, Brandy writing with Susan is pure joy
Date: 8/29/2021 4:50:00 PM
Very romantic, Frederic, congratulations on POTD!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:08:00 AM
thank you Eve
Date: 8/29/2021 2:05:00 PM
the amazing magic when two poets meld thought...congratulations, your fans have spoken...have a wonderful week dear poets....much love, james
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:09:00 AM
thank you, James yes it is magical to write with Susan
Date: 8/29/2021 1:22:00 PM
Beautiful, congratulations on POTD!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:10:00 AM
thank you Tania
Date: 8/29/2021 12:36:00 PM
Frederic and Susan, beautiful and congratulations on receiving POEM OF HE DAY enjoy the honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:11:00 AM
thank you Constance for your very kind remark
Date: 8/29/2021 12:30:00 PM
This to me is truly a fantastic and wonderfully inspiring creation! Congratulations to both truly talented and creative poets on this gem and its most well deserved recognition as the Soup's new POTD.. Exceptional and marvelous are very apt descriptive words to describe. A fav.. God bless...
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:13:00 AM
thank you, Robert I know how much you love poetry, so your words have a special meaning
Date: 8/29/2021 11:47:00 AM
Superb collaboration, no one can make it out. Poem itself is beautiful. Congratulations on your well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour both of you
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:13:00 AM
thank you Rama
Date: 8/29/2021 11:30:00 AM
Back with congratulations on achieving a POTD!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:14:00 AM
thank you Jennifer
Date: 8/29/2021 9:53:00 AM
Lovely work, you two. Congratulations on your POTD!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:14:00 AM
thank you Milton
Date: 8/29/2021 8:52:00 AM
What a romantic write in an amazing collaboration by you both dear Susan and Frederick Parker... so many beautiful lines... "glistening glimmer of sensual glint.. "... "romantic interludes of welcomed fervor wrapped in the wondrous arms of wonder.. "... Just Awesome ... Hearty congrats to you both on a well deserved POTD honor. God bless... ~ Ani
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:15:00 AM
and may God bless you poet for your kind remarks
Date: 8/29/2021 8:45:00 AM
To Frederick and Susan "Congratulations" on your POTD win. An amazing story/write. "Love It" Have a blessed day.......................
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:16:00 AM
thank you Paula
Date: 8/29/2021 6:44:00 AM
I'm inspired by the beauty of your stunning exploration of the power of love! Congratulations to you both!!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:16:00 AM
thank you Mike
Date: 8/29/2021 5:38:00 AM
Susan the depth of your passion shines through your poetry, I am truly honored to share our imaginations and skip a rock or two across the poetic lake where we sit in the shade of friendship, dear poet, dear friend...Frederic
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Susan Ashley
Date: 8/29/2021 9:49:00 AM
Frederic, thank you for your kindness. The beauty of your words capture the joyful, soulful, honoring wonder of our shared creative experience and poetic friendship so perfectly. I cherish your amazing thoughts. Congratulations for our poem being recognized with POTD honors. I'm so pleased it's being celebrated on your page, dear poet, dear friend.. ~Susan
Date: 8/29/2021 12:47:00 AM
A very romantic verse Frederick and Susan, you work so well together. Congrats to you both on POTD honours. Tom
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:17:00 AM
thank you Tom
Date: 8/28/2021 4:03:00 AM
OMG I need to fav this one . Two talented artists, who gave their very best. I am so proud of both of you. xo
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:19:00 AM
Mystic as one of my writing buddies I really appreciate your kind words
Date: 8/27/2021 4:48:00 PM
Dear Frederic, it was both a pleasure and an honor to follow the romantic lead of our poetic muse and create this love poem. Thank you for your gracious invitation to dance a duet with your heart and for being so generous with your ardent artistry and enchanting inspiration. Warmest wishes to you, dear, poet, dear friend.. ~Susan
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2021 11:20:00 AM
Susan, dear friend, dear poet, truly you are a poet's poet

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