When Old and Poor

WHEN OLD AND POOR



We  know we’re old and poor when  we’re
Using a comb with almost no teeth spare
To  smooth a  head with almost no  hair
Or  when the  tweezered-out white hair 
Exceeds  the   amount   remaining  there
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 17, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Hi Sydney Agreed.And what about the hair that grows to excess elsewhere?-my other half-Also don't get me started on memory loss or repeating yourself!We seem to show signs of dementia before we even get it.As for money what's that?Still we can at least laugh at ourselves,lifes too short when your 'old 'to take yourself too seriously.Thanks for the laugh you gave me,enjoyed this. luv June(Sylvia)
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