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When Nature Moans

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Of late, nature moans inside a scraped womb As her lush environ FLOUNDERS breaks out… Played like a trusting NEOPHYTE from woods to rivers She endures the BOMBAST of dirt through man’s crimes: Awaiting kindness …amends remain undone While LECHEROUS deeds persist without guilt, why, why? More wrongs ravage innocent fish and flora Infecting her very marrow, to drain away. Loot, SMOLDER, rip a body ! Time runs out. Mother Earth answers through bloodied jolts… By will of PROVIDENCE, she whips a storm without INHIBITION Halting indifference, her fire scalds air’s layers, A battle citizens might grow DOLOROUS over-- Until her soul is nourished back, till she moans no more. ----------- Eight Word Free Verse Challenge For John Hamilton’s Contest 6/13/2019

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Robertina B.

Date: 6/30/2019 8:15:00 AM

You had created a masterpiece, Nette.. I absolutely enjoyed this.. Exquisite and lovely, my friend.. A fav for me!! Have a blessed day..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/21/2019 1:22:00 PM

Back with Congrats dear Nette - well done. Hugs, Jennifer.

John Hamilton

Date: 6/21/2019 12:25:00 PM

Loved every word Nette, congrats on another fine win!

Judy Ball

Date: 6/18/2019 4:48:00 AM

So well said Nette. Man has from the beginning tried to improve on what God already made perfect and in so doing he is destroying his own environment. Man can't seem to learn to leave well enough alone. Good job here. Bravo. God Bless, JB

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/15/2019 7:01:00 PM

Oh she will moan until in her moaning she decides to rid herself of our infestation

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/15/2019 5:29:00 AM

Sweetly placed and victoriously rendered my dear. Goo luck in the contest Nette. It was a pleasure reading your poem today xo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/15/2019 12:45:00 AM

An intriguing piece Nette. Hugs Rick. Good luck in the contest.

Charles Messina

Date: 6/14/2019 10:50:00 PM

Absolutely superb writing, Nette. Love this! Bets wishes for a win...hugs // Charlie :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/14/2019 7:53:00 PM

The depth and breadth of your magnificent artistry knows no bounds, Nette. I feel the pain of Nature's moans through the heart and soul of your luminous poetry. Superb and a fav! Best wishes for a win and best wishes for you.. ~Susan

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/14/2019 6:02:00 PM

Well said! Too bad Pele exhausted herself burning rubbish and microplastics. What next? Aloha! Rico

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 6/14/2019 12:21:00 PM

Woah a great hard hitting poem on man's rapacious destructive ways against the planet . This is the 3rd poem I read with the same words is it some word prompt of a contest perhaps.? Anyway you have employed them effectively in support of Mother Nature. Kudos. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/14/2019 9:03:00 AM

But nature will fight back , we see it daily. Great write Nette. Tom

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/13/2019 10:59:00 PM

You took these difficult words and shaped them into an important message Mother nature would utter if she could. Are you ill dear Nette? I know you mentioned your doctor told you to rest. If so I hope you will be feeling well again real soon. Hugs, Connie xxoo

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/13/2019 5:45:00 PM

Ugh--all messed! Nice and tight write, as seems all those I've come across--unlike my storybook version--a small ugh for me nette, Aloha William

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/13/2019 5:20:00 PM

You know it...you feel what the earth feels...Well written...

John Gondolf

Date: 6/13/2019 5:12:00 PM

Nette, this is a wonderful write on man's disrespect for nature. It is so sad but we see it all the time. Best of luck in the contest my friend. John

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/13/2019 5:06:00 PM

You captured the moans of nature in your usual artistic style, Nette...so amazed how well you used those uncooperative contest words. All the best for a win.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/13/2019 3:16:00 PM

Nette - you're back - missed you, and with a wonderful write - so well penned. A talented write - also sent in a poem for this contest - good luck my friend! Hugs, Jennifer.