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When My Big Sister Stepped In-Contest

When My Big Sister Stepped In Sponsor: Eve Roper It was a cloudy Thursday, March 2009... I remember it clearly... I was shivering in withdrawal, my blood was boiling as I began to fall. Addicted to my addiction, lost in my fantasies of hopelessness... Walking down the wrong path of conviction into a black hole of nothingness, And there you were... baby sister needing, her big sister... You held me, you fed me, you carried me upstairs, and drew me a warm bath. You compelled me, dressed me, sat me down and prepared me. pushed me on the right path. Similar experiences you have seen, your past drifted into my present, motivated me to get sober and clean, to grow up and be independent. Same parents, related through blood, I was crippled and paralyzed, It was you, Karen, the only one who understood, my big sister I idolized. Date Written: December 21, 2015

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Date: 1/17/2016 11:57:00 PM
Congrats Laura for realization of perfect sisterhood. Hugs. Anisha D
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Date: 1/17/2016 11:56:00 PM
Congrats Laura for realization of perfect sisterhood. Hugs. Anisha D
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Date: 1/15/2016 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations on this win with this heartfelt sincere poem and tribute to your sister. This one touched home.
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Date: 1/16/2016 12:27:00 PM
Thank you very much Susan for your kind words...*smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/15/2016 5:32:00 PM
You are so so lucky you have the support of a loving family LuLoo ... stay strong and keep on fighting those demons may they remain firmly locked in the past:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/16/2016 12:27:00 PM
Thank you very much lovely lady :) "smiles*
Date: 1/15/2016 4:38:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your placement on my “When Older Siblings or Younger Step In”... contest. A wonderful tribute to your loving sister that stood by you. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/15/2016 5:06:00 PM
Thank you very much Eve, I really enjoyed your contest. It was an honor to be a part of it...-*smiles*- luloo
Date: 1/15/2016 4:25:00 PM
laurels for you on your win, laura... congrats with huggs
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Date: 1/15/2016 5:05:00 PM
Thank you very much Nette...you are always so sweet :)-luloo *smiles*

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