When Mandela Died

When Mandela died
The government lied
and lying still 
as does he

Nothing moved
No one dared
but some stuff dies
and some are spared
but I was moved
no one touched 
me, like he does

and no one loves you like I do
and no one sees Im blinded too
but I saw you nude
Your clothes were see through
Then.

This voyeurist
 This polemicist
 This iconoclast
(big names for a liar like me)
shriveled up inside
felt your broken mind
penetrate me, rape me
Committed suicide
Hope was hanging from a tree
The day Mandela died
Is lying still
the government and
...so do I

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/25/2018 1:03:00 PM
A great man indeed Jannie! Have you heard of the Mandela effect? I wrote a poem about it. It is very confusing for everyone who remembers things the way they were. Have a great day! xxoo
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 1/25/2018 10:20:00 PM
Connie, the opposite happened though. It is quite deplorable. We.were all fooled
Date: 8/14/2017 2:33:00 PM
You bare your heart and soul w/such force of nature ... Mandela woulda been proud of your truthfulness, Jannie. He was an honorable man who loved his people. Great write, my friend. The opening stanza is sparkling w/such a strong dual meaning. Love always.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 8/15/2017 2:49:00 AM
Hi Freddie, its always so wonderful to get.a comment from you. Thank you
Date: 8/14/2017 7:33:00 AM
It is a mournful poem with a touch underlying anger. He was someone I looked up to as a hero. Well written.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/15/2017 9:22:00 AM
I love the colour red!
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 8/15/2017 2:50:00 AM
Hi Patricia. So wonderful to find you here again. The red carpet is out just for you. Thank you
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