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When Mandela Died

When Mandela died The government lied and lying still as does he Nothing moved No one dared but some stuff dies and some are spared but I was moved no one touched me, like he does and no one loves you like I do and no one sees Im blinded too but I saw you nude Your clothes were see through Then. This voyeurist This polemicist This iconoclast (big names for a liar like me) shriveled up inside felt your broken mind penetrate me, rape me Committed suicide Hope was hanging from a tree The day Mandela died Is lying still the government and ...so do I

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Date: 1/25/2018 1:03:00 PM
A great man indeed Jannie! Have you heard of the Mandela effect? I wrote a poem about it. It is very confusing for everyone who remembers things the way they were. Have a great day! xxoo
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 1/25/2018 10:20:00 PM
Connie, the opposite happened though. It is quite deplorable. We.were all fooled
Date: 8/14/2017 2:33:00 PM
You bare your heart and soul w/such force of nature ... Mandela woulda been proud of your truthfulness, Jannie. He was an honorable man who loved his people. Great write, my friend. The opening stanza is sparkling w/such a strong dual meaning. Love always.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 8/15/2017 2:49:00 AM
Hi Freddie, its always so wonderful to get.a comment from you. Thank you
Date: 8/14/2017 7:33:00 AM
It is a mournful poem with a touch underlying anger. He was someone I looked up to as a hero. Well written.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/15/2017 9:22:00 AM
I love the colour red!
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 8/15/2017 2:50:00 AM
Hi Patricia. So wonderful to find you here again. The red carpet is out just for you. Thank you

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