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This Form is called a Miniature. In lieu of writing a Tanka or  Haiku or one of the many small forms that were created for a completely different language. The Miniature accommodates the English language. I think this Form could draw in a younger audience to love poetry. In their fast paced world Epic poems may be too much. A Haiku or a Tanka or the many short forms available might confuse the reader with their tight rules and restrictions. Hence the miniature. A small concise poetic message.

 

When two lovers of days past, relive the same memory, at exactly the same time, they touch once again, from where ever they are.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/3/2015 10:10:00 PM
Remembering this gem and wishing you were here again!
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Date: 11/4/2014 3:53:00 PM
wowowow, I sure hope that is true. And I hope it will happen for me ONE DAY!! Thanks for finally posting this mini poem you told me about. I love it!!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/4/2014 4:02:00 PM
If I say it then it is true
Date: 11/4/2014 2:45:00 PM
aww that is a cool thought, I'd like to see more shorter poems without the brick walls. this was cool babe
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/4/2014 4:03:00 PM
Thanks Cas.

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