Notes About The Poem

This Form is called a Miniature. In lieu of writing a Tanka or  Haiku or one of the many small forms that were created for a completely different language. The Miniature accommodates the English language. I think this Form could draw in a younger audience to love poetry. In their fast paced world Epic poems may be too much. A Haiku or a Tanka or the many short forms available might confuse the reader with their tight rules and restrictions. Hence the miniature. A small concise poetic message.

 

When Lovers Part

When two lovers of days past, relive the same memory, at exactly the same time, they touch once again, from where ever they are.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 10:10 PM
Remembering this gem and wishing you were here again!
Dietrich Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 3:53 PM
wowowow, I sure hope that is true. And I hope it will happen for me ONE DAY!! Thanks for finally posting this mini poem you told me about. I love it!!!
Yvonne Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 4:02 PM
If I say it then it is true
Nance Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 2:45 PM
aww that is a cool thought, I'd like to see more shorter poems without the brick walls. this was cool babe
Yvonne Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 4:03 PM
Thanks Cas.
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