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When memories fade, like luminous fireflies and days become another red thread, on horizons When hope is nothing more than a wish, held in the heart as a reminder, when love was you and I was a warm shadow to its light To what end, do you haunt me so? Is it desire? To once again feel my feet endlessly float Is it passion's yearning? Caused by your mouth's kisses Is it warmth from your hands? As they held tight in conformation Yes, I've kept your memory close A jeweled reflection, of a passing star, leaving a fiery trail through the night sky, disappearing into the darkness Leaving only a silent wish and a sense of awe 8/7/17

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Date: 8/21/2017 7:47:00 AM
Frederic I like this poem you wrote it is so beautiful. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/14/2017 10:00:00 PM
I enjoyed listening to this very much. A great love poem.
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Date: 8/7/2017 5:32:00 PM
Alas , lost love!!! It makes for the best poetry ever!! This time I could hear your reading, and I FAVE This one.
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Date: 8/7/2017 4:07:00 PM
May true love's memories never fade, lovely Frederick...
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Date: 8/7/2017 12:38:00 PM
Having memories of a love that still burns as the trail of a falling star is passion to behold, Frederic. Beautifully written.
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Date: 8/7/2017 12:25:00 PM
This is an outstanding poem ! Ended perfectly too! I love it Frederic. I hope it becomes POTD :)
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Date: 8/7/2017 11:42:00 AM
Gorgeous piece of poetry this!
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