When Love Was Paired To Blossom

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*Image of Love Pairs Two by Pixabay. When Love Was Paired To Blossom When love was paired to blossom, 'twas lost words in a song, Oaths and dreams didst fill the air, 'tis distance true and long, Thus foolproof days fleet away, September launched to June, Paired love hath cared to blossom, pray two 'tis best be soon. When love was paired to blossom, petals had strewn its ground, Barren branch stretched on its own, flowers no longer bound, Time nor nature's caused compelled, wither welts take its tolls, Love that was paired to blossom, adorns entombed paired souls. 2022 February 11 *1st Place* A BRIAN STRAND RIME ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 February 22

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Valsa George

Date: 2/13/2022 4:56:00 AM

So sad, when love was paired to blossom its petals had strewn the ground ! But in another world it will continue to blossom and shed its fragrance ! An emotive write with a touch of melancholy!

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/13/2022 8:10:00 AM

Your invaluable statements occasion well, Valsa, for truth betold a message, whereto, life is fleeting, but love is eternal my friend, Aloha~William!