When Love Takes Over

Sometimes twenty-four hours in a day is not enough, an extra hour or two is better to 

spend more time with that special someone. The days are slow, the nights are long, just

 long enough to dream about her. Having the best of both worlds is incredible, in reality 

you get to see a better day when that special person is with you, when you are 

sleeping, she is in your world, and together, we can build our dreams. I wish for her to 

see how I see her for the amazing person that she is, I wish to be in the place where I

know I can be with her, her future.......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 11, 2011 at 8:28 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Jordan. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol
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