When Love Is Not Enough

“I’m so sorry for your loss.” “She was a lovely person, inside and out!” With “ . . . so sorry” . . . “ . . . so sorry” still sing-songing in my mind, I heard, “She’s in a better place, Dear!” I cringed at this one while hugging the well-meaning, sweet friend and fighting the urge to scream, “She should be at the movies with her friends!” My legs had no bones;
God must have been holding me up. Oh, God, You could have simply refused to let her come to You! Then you wouldn’t have to be my legs. The piano music and singing were almost indescribably beautiful, the parts I heard. Our Pastor said all the right things, avoiding the common platitudes. Of course, he didn’t disclose why her young heart failed. Love of family and friends was not enough, at that time, to comfort me. ************************** She was hooked—from the first time. Rehab failed repeatedly. My fervent prayers weren’t enough. My love, which I thought was SO powerful, wasn’t enough.
Date: September 9, 2019 Contest Title: Sometimes Love Is Not Enough Sponsor: Silent One
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La France Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 3:01 PM
Janice congratulations on your win
Canerdy Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 3:34 PM
THANK YOU so much! Janice
Mcintosh Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 11:36 PM
I love your poem and it is so sad that this happens. Congratulations and blessings
Canerdy Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 7:05 AM
Thanks so much, Regina. Janice
One Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 11:58 AM
Enjoyed your take on the contest Janice.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Canerdy Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 6:21 PM
THANK YOU for my placement, S.O. :-)
Pandit Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 9:40 AM
Deep emotions, Janice--a sad story brilliantly told..so true to life..so well written.
Canerdy Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 10:59 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Gauthier Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 11:06 PM
Very poignant, Janice. Well penned.
Canerdy Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Lamoureux Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 2:15 PM
This is so well expressed. I think people just don’t know what to say. Sometimes sitting with someone and saying nothing is the best way to offer comfort.
Canerdy Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 4:08 PM
True. I always end up thinking that what I said to the bereaved sounded SO lame! Thanks, Richard. Janice
Green Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 2:11 PM
Wow, this was a heartbreaking Janice. The emotions were deeply felt. You did a fantastic job with this and should do well in the contest.
Canerdy Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 4:09 PM
Thanks so much, Chris. Janice
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