When Love Is Forever

Resting on the beige leather couch next to the dimly lit tiffany lamp He dozed off into an early night sleep She smiled looking at him as She sat beside him rubbing softly his tired feet. She removed his specs and book from the chest, Took off her winter house-coat leaned over and covered him with it kissing his left cheek,feeling so blessed. With eyes full of love She watched him and wondered if he still sees her in his dreams Like way back down memory lane when he used to tug on tightly to his pillow dreaming of her as he felt the midnight breeze Did he still dream of moments way back When he wanted so much to sit next to her on that high-school old wooden park bench or of those city strolls walking her home holding her hand after the Saturday dance. Everything was silent in the cosy room And She remained there ...lost in thought .. How She recalled treasured moments of their curled toes brushing in the sand, Of moments when his hand drenched in rippled waves and playfullly splashed water against her bare shoulders and over her face. She could still smell the salt-spray in her hair. So many yesterdays have passed since then So many memories, so many changes Him and Her forever changing... Her porcelain skin ,now wrinkled Her cascading chestnut hair turned grey Yet one thing never changed. Her heart, Her young heart remained constant Just like the stars, the sun and moon scorching their infinite flames. Oncemore She reached so very close to him So close She could feel the warmth in his breath and feel his heart-beat to her own. "Let me curl next to you", She whispered into his ear "This night is ours my lovely dear". "Death ! Oh death will have to wait another day We'll beat the odds,like warriors, We'll beat them again Together we can do anything,So hold me my love Hold me in your sweet embrace.. Tomorrow,What is and when is tomorrow Tomorrow If you leave before me I keep on loving you,as long as I live Whatever,wherever, come what may."
Not a bio .. inspired by the old couple in the Movie 'The Notebook'.

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Date: 11/27/2016 12:19:00 PM
A really beautiful piece Charmaine, Enjoyed every breath taking word!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 11/21/2016 3:49:00 PM
Haven't seen the movie but your poem is brilliant x I don't often read peoples entire poems because I get board x I red yours x well done very poetic x
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Date: 11/19/2016 8:55:00 AM
One of my favourite movies. I love how you did this one. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 11/18/2016 1:06:00 PM
i remember that movie... such a graceful poem that affirms love can be an eternal glint of forever, charms... good stuff!... huggs
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Date: 11/17/2016 5:25:00 PM
I love this poem, such beautiful imagery you have penned here! :)! Have a wonderful rest of your day! <3 Juli-Michelle.
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Date: 11/17/2016 7:39:00 AM
What a beautiful poem about love. Very deep and excellent write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 11/17/2016 6:47:00 AM
- I love this comparison: "Just like the stars, the sun and moon scorching their infinite flames" - A beautiful and deeply moving poem, Charmaine - A big 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/16/2016 4:57:00 PM
I had tears in my eyes reading this beautiful love. Such a romantic and touching read. It's a definite fav.
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Date: 11/16/2016 4:46:00 PM
You had me at " rubbing softly his tired feet." What a superb beautifully written romantic poem!
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Date: 11/16/2016 12:15:00 PM
I absolutely love this one Charmaine. It is going into my favorites. It is so filled with precious genuine love. Very well written! :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/16/2016 1:00:00 PM
Oh thanks so much sweet Heidi..Am honoured : )
Date: 11/16/2016 11:26:00 AM
This poem is so filled with love, the memories of how it was and the dreams of how it can and still will be. This was so heart touching Charmaine that it brought a tear to eye, because a love like this is so special and doesn't happen all that much anymore. I could picture all of this, from the high school days to this chilly autumn night when she is holding him and loving him forever. So beautiful.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/16/2016 12:59:00 PM
I do wish to have that kind of love still young at heart when I grow old..I know it exists..just need to work for it to have it..Am glad you liked it..Love your comments. :) Thanks.
Date: 11/16/2016 10:25:00 AM
I'm sure he is still dreaming of you. It is everyman's wish to have a forever love.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/16/2016 12:55:00 PM
Thanks Tim..I hope my husband will still dream of me when Im wrinkled and old..This is inspired by the movie the notebook...Its about an old couple who remained in love till the end..Thanks for reading.
Date: 11/16/2016 10:11:00 AM
Sweetly nostalgic exalting a seasonable relationship, lovely Charmaine.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/16/2016 1:01:00 PM
Oh thankyou dear :)
Date: 11/16/2016 9:51:00 AM
Love in age so beautifully honored! I cry for the loss of it.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/16/2016 1:02:00 PM
All lost can be found again...am sure...thanks dear.
Date: 11/16/2016 9:39:00 AM
Beautiful poem about love...just a couple of misspelled words. I wish I was in a relationship like this
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Date: 11/16/2016 12:57:00 PM
Oh it was still under-construction when you read it..but still need to revise it again..Glad you liked it ..thanks
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