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When Love Forgets

When love forgets, you wait at the door/ wearing the lingerie he bought you before/ when love forgets, you wait for the nice words/ but the words never come and you never get heard/ when love forgets, he changes your views/ and looks at the women in their high heeled shoes/ he dosent respond in the way that he should/ together for years, but this doesn't feel good/ His eyes wander fast to every next cleavage/ your small breasts no contest, you feel you're not needed/ you're just a bit part now, he takes you for granted/ should you move on, the seed has been planted/ you want to be loved and cherished and adored/ not to stay at home washing plates, being bored/ you want to go back when he very first knew you/ in a passionate way his eyes used to view you/ relegated now to a place you don't recognise/ when you laugh the smile does not reach your eyes/ the only affection you gets from the cat/ your still a young woman, how sad is that? but what you don't notice when you leave the house/ are so many suitors waiting to pounce/ they notice your hair and your eyes and your spirit/ your old man at home does not think to fear it/ He's got you where he wants you, a dutiful housewife/ he thinks your happy with your stepford wives life/ But be warned Mr. conceited, while you lie to yourself/ She will be the muse of a handsome someone else/ He will love her and cherish her and fulfill her every need/ show her the good things and devour her with greed/ while they lie naked entangled debating her dull life/ you should have been loving your stay at home housewife/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/28/2011 10:56:00 PM
Brilliant write!You are a very talented writer.Enjoyed your poems----kashinath
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Date: 1/27/2011 2:40:00 PM
Terrific poetry Lisa, the wordage is ideal. Many thank you's for your wonderful kind words on my poetry....:)x
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Date: 1/26/2011 10:09:00 PM
This is pure profoundness Lisa, wonderful poem, ajoy to read. Harry
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Date: 1/26/2011 9:46:00 PM
fantastic- i'm not one for rhyming poetry but i really enjoyed this there are some great lines in this piece, im glad i read this, take care
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