When Love Finally Define

I the one who took a shelter in your brittleness
Who was hiding behind your tears
The covert strength which overwhelm your weakness
I am the sunbeam reversed to your darkness

Your tears are my wounds
The clatter of your journey is an obvious scratches
Which frequently seize my heart
And these feels are yours, even yet you touch though you see 

I try to open the casement of my heart and trace it
Is there anyone or whom?
Is it you, the biggest question?
Or maybe you are the answer

Everything revolve, encircle between the conscience and thoughts

I tried to pull my self out, withdrew all the feels that I've got
Yet the trails of yours continuously compel my limits
The silhouettes of your times mesmerize  my days
I trapped within the charm of your soul
 
However these barriers are no longer be sustainable

I will run after you
I no longer be an idle beneath the dark side of you
I'm finished with the dawn and I will be the day

I quit play as the role of a shadow
For I am the tangible, I am real...
As real as the embrace of twilight  which always there for you


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                                       old romantic poems........ 
                               Sponsored by: SKAT- AB SIN THE-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/17/2013 8:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/17/2013 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Abdul, I really appreciate your visits into my pages :) glad to have a comment by you :) wishing you a wonderful day there :) hug, yanny
Date: 1/3/2013 12:07:00 AM
I wanted to read some of your earlier work and I see that this poem was a winner. Enjoyed reading your poem and congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/3/2013 12:18:00 AM
Thank you Jon, it's really a pleasure :D
Date: 12/16/2012 9:30:00 AM
Wonderful piece! Congrats.
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Date: 12/15/2012 10:37:00 AM
wow, this is a beautiful love poem, Yanny. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/15/2012 5:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot once more Yanny love xx
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Date: 12/14/2012 8:55:00 PM
Yanny, congratulations in the Skat, contest. Take Care PD
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/15/2012 12:19:00 AM
Thanks Linda, have a wonderful Christmas :D
Date: 12/14/2012 7:27:00 PM
Congratulations ~SKAT~
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/15/2012 12:14:00 AM
Thank's Skat, I really enjoyed your contest :D - Hug, Yanny
Date: 11/18/2012 7:39:00 AM
You are now in my fav poet list.... Amazing soulful write... very nice Michael
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/18/2012 8:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Michael, your supports are really encouraging and I appreciate you a lot for your kindly visit to my pages and glad that you like them, it also feels like brighten my day too :)
Date: 11/6/2012 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your fantastic writing being featured this week Yanny. Love, Carol
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/6/2012 7:27:00 AM
Thank you carol, can't made it without any support from you guys in this art :), glad can be part of this society ^^ - Regard, Yanny
Date: 11/2/2012 9:24:00 AM
Beautifully penned !Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 11/3/2012 8:27:00 PM
Thank you Kash :)
Date: 10/30/2012 11:42:00 PM
interesting write. You have a unique artistic interpretation - JH
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Date: 10/31/2012 12:43:00 AM
Thank you JH :) - YW
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