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Damp evening wanes over the hills To trail away, so far from sight My burnt eyes watch a hollowed dusk Evanescing into the night : Our deep affection takes a leave For it’s wartime… and off you go, While petals drop their silhouettes Against ache of hours’ afterglow. My raking breath withdraws from me, Like raked twilight’s painful behest When nothing but our love endures; As seasons drown this empty nest… TILL your lively voice peals to call, Igniting wait of ardor's sway-- How immeasurable rapture Greets evensong and fate, halfway! ~*~ 10/1/2017 Love for Movie Screens :A Silent One Contest

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Date: 10/5/2017 7:57:00 AM
This is gorgeous, Nette, as is everything you write - love this! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - great stuff! :-)
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Date: 10/4/2017 9:18:00 PM
Deeply emotional and beautifully intimate. An amazing write Nette. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/4/2017 9:08:00 PM
Congratulations on the intensity of deep emotions expressed in a few lines.
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Date: 10/4/2017 1:41:00 PM
nette, back to say congrats !
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Date: 10/4/2017 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette!
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Date: 10/4/2017 9:05:00 AM
A lovely, lovely poem!
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Date: 10/4/2017 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/4/2017 6:12:00 AM
An Awesome write Nette, you my friend are one amazing poet. A winner in my eyes already, but Good Luck...Maria xx
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Date: 10/2/2017 3:46:00 PM
Nette, such a beautiful write!
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Date: 10/1/2017 1:12:00 PM
Beautiful! I can't imagine how difficult it must be waiting for a loved one to return from war. I just wish no one had to go through this agony. I wish we lived in a world of peace and that war didn't exist.
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Date: 10/1/2017 8:13:00 AM
- A delightful poem, Nette :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/1/2017 8:08:00 AM
I agree with Connie...beautifully done nette...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 10/1/2017 7:12:00 AM
I think this is excellent, Nette, Good Luck xxoo
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Date: 9/30/2017 7:54:00 PM
Wow Nette, this is a keeper! I will hazard to say this will be a top winner! I loved it! A Fave! : )
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Date: 9/30/2017 7:10:00 PM
Very well written.. best for a win, nette!
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Date: 9/30/2017 5:42:00 PM
Very nice Nette. ! Good luck in the contest :)
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