Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

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When Love Endures All

Damp evening wanes over the hills
To trail away, so far from sight
My burnt eyes watch a hollowed dusk
Evanescing into the night :
Our deep affection takes a leave
For it’s wartime… and off you go,
While petals drop their silhouettes
Against ache of hours’ afterglow.

My raking breath withdraws from me,
Like raked twilight’s painful behest
When nothing but our love endures;
As seasons drown this empty  nest…
TILL   your lively voice peals to call,
Igniting wait of  ardor's sway--
How  immeasurable    rapture
Greets evensong and fate, halfway!


~*~   
10/1/2017
Love for Movie Screens :A Silent One Contest

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Gregory Richard Barden October 5, 2017 at 7:57 AM This is gorgeous, Nette, as is everything you write - love this! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - great stuff! :-)

Susan Ashley October 4, 2017 at 9:18 PM Deeply emotional and beautifully intimate. An amazing write Nette. Congratulations.

Janis Medders Tobechi October 4, 2017 at 9:08 PM Congratulations on the intensity of deep emotions expressed in a few lines.

Constance La France October 4, 2017 at 1:41 PM nette, back to say congrats !

Eve Roper October 4, 2017 at 12:07 PM Congratulations on your win, Nette!

L. J. Carber October 4, 2017 at 9:05 AM A lovely, lovely poem!

Silent One October 4, 2017 at 7:12 AM Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Maria Williams October 4, 2017 at 6:12 AM An Awesome write Nette, you my friend are one amazing poet. A winner in my eyes already, but Good Luck...Maria xx

Constance La France October 2, 2017 at 3:46 PM Nette, such a beautiful write!

Carol B. October 1, 2017 at 1:12 PM Beautiful! I can't imagine how difficult it must be waiting for a loved one to return from war. I just wish no one had to go through this agony. I wish we lived in a world of peace and that war didn't exist.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2017 at 8:13 AM - A delightful poem, Nette :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior October 1, 2017 at 8:08 AM I agree with Connie...beautifully done nette...god bless...^WW^

Mike Gentile October 1, 2017 at 7:12 AM I think this is excellent, Nette, Good Luck xxoo

Connie Marcum Wong September 30, 2017 at 7:54 PM Wow Nette, this is a keeper! I will hazard to say this will be a top winner! I loved it! A Fave! : )

Vijay Pandit September 30, 2017 at 7:10 PM Very well written.. best for a win, nette!

Heidi Sands September 30, 2017 at 5:42 PM Very nice Nette. ! Good luck in the contest :)