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When Love Breathes Us In

We've all seen those Hallmark stories The ones too good to be true Where there's a perfect love connection That fate miraculously brings to you So will tomorrow just be another day Of distant dreams and fairy tales What if... Love breathes us in Oh, everything changes Cupid's dart... Goes straight through the heart All the loneliness ends And a new life begins When love breathes us in What if love breathes us in And what if while you're sleeping Your unknown soulmate's dreaming too Both lost in true love's longing So soon to awake to "I love you" Seems like doubt is always raining Feels like hope is an empty plea But what if "what's been" is lost In morning light it turns to "will be" When love breathes us in Oh, everything changes Cupid's dart... Goes straight through the heart All the loneliness ends And a new life begins When love breathes us in What if love breathes us in When love breathes us in Oh, everything changes Cupid's dart... Goes straight through the heart All the loneliness ends And a new life begins When love breathes us in When love breathes us in ~Lyric Man Note: This write was inspired by a comment a fellow poet made to one of my poems. She used this phrase, "when love breathes us in" I thought it was such a beautiful line I built this song around it. I hope you've enjoy!

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Date: 7/22/2018 3:15:00 AM
love the term "When love breathes us in"beautiful thought good write.
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Date: 6/18/2018 10:45:00 PM
You are a very talented lyricist! Enjoyed this thoroughly. Have you written songs professionally?You should if yo haven't. Very nice job....Larry
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Date: 6/9/2018 7:29:00 AM
A delightful write Write on!! Jelsr
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Date: 6/3/2018 9:07:00 PM
Chance, this incredible piece is just oozing with romance and the awesome power of love to "breathe us in!" So lovely, my friend - it's what all of us long for! Beautifully written. Love and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/20/2018 12:06:00 AM
What a beautiful poem, inspired by a beautiful line - a poem full of hope that love could be just around the corner.
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Book: Shattered Sighs