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When Louise Cut the Cheese

She was such a prim and proper wife. When asked to cut the cheese, she'd ask her spouse to, please because she did not like to use a knife. But sometimes she would sneeze. She could not help it then; she'd cut the cheese! At such time, we'd be holding our noses. It's for sure we were not smelling roses, and we all would cry out, "Geez, Louise!" Nov. 13, 2018 for Barry Stebbings' Write A Poem About Cheese Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/16/2018 6:40:00 AM
A little humor goes a long way. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for stopping by again on my work about my heart. Sara
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Date: 11/15/2018 8:10:00 PM
So funny!! Be blessed, sweet friend
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Date: 11/15/2018 1:52:00 PM
This poem really made me laugh because I have said that "Geez, Louise!" so many times over things. I hope Barry has as much fun reading this as I did Andrea! : )
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Date: 11/15/2018 8:37:00 AM
You went there, to "Jan-land." I don't know why, but I can't get comfortable with going 'there' like others are, yet it doesn't bother me a bit. I'm just weird. I was highly entertained and, pardon the pun, I didn't know you had this in you. Enjoyed! Love ... CayCay
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/15/2018 8:41:00 PM
I do have a few more like this 'hiding' in all my pages!!
Date: 11/15/2018 5:29:00 AM
Lovely cheese entry Andrea...got to love these cheese squeeze entries...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 11/14/2018 5:03:00 PM
Hi Andrea, loved the fun within this write. I love the content, well, this is almost my last comment for the night. I am glad I caught this one. Still giggling yet. Good luck in the contest Andrea. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 11/14/2018 3:41:00 PM
Heh heh... I thought I'd clicked on one of Jan's poems, when I saw this!! Hopefully Barry will appreciate the humour!! Regards, John.
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Date: 11/14/2018 12:58:00 PM
Nice one, Andrea, though I'm not sure this is what Barry meant with a poem about cheese (this is the first thing I though of as well when I saw the contest). Love your sense of humor. Best of luck. John
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Date: 11/13/2018 9:16:00 PM
Too cute :)
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Date: 11/13/2018 7:02:00 PM
I love the "geez Louise" at the end!
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Date: 11/13/2018 6:30:00 PM
Hahahaha! Poor prim & proper Louise! ;D
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Date: 11/13/2018 4:07:00 PM
A funny limerick poem, Andrea!
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Date: 11/13/2018 2:16:00 PM
A fun read, Andrea.
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Date: 11/13/2018 2:12:00 PM
Love your take on the contest (sometimes I have the same problem when I sneeze!)
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Date: 11/13/2018 10:37:00 AM
Cute one Andrea, the stronger it us the better I like it. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 11/13/2018 10:25:00 AM
Better than a limerick,Andrea..love it..
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Date: 11/13/2018 9:58:00 AM
LOL. Good one Andrea :) Thanks for the laugh .
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