When Lightening Strikes


So whom does the lightening 
strike ?
While your hiding behind 
that big oak tree.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 11:24 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, Lightening strikes the person behind the tree. Hugs. /Darlene/
Rose  Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 2:40 PM
yes if it is your fate, it will hit no matter where you hide
DiMino Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 4:48 AM
It can get both, with one bolt...hiding or not. Yep, take one's chances out in the open -- like a proud warrior. I hear ya! Charged advice.
Rose  Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 2:40 PM
you seem to read my mind lol, how do you do it !
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