When Life Feels As If You Are Drowning

When life feels heavy and hard to bear,
And you're drowning in feelings of despair,
Remember that storms don't last forever,
And the sun will shine again, whenever.

Though the road may be rough and tough to tread,
And it feels like joy and hope have all but fled,
Hold on tight and don't give up the fight,
For even in darkness, there is still light.

Life is a journey, full of twists and turns,
But remember, it's okay to feel the burns,
For in the ashes, new beginnings can grow,
And your strength and resilience will surely show.

So when life doesn't seem to get better,
Hold on to hope and don't be a quitter,
Know that you are not alone in your strife,
And better days will come, in time, in this life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Schlesinger-Fleming Avatar
August 4, 2024 at 7:45 AM
Congrats on becoming a Lifetime Premium Member! Great advice in a beautiful write.
Dejesus Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 10:36 PM
Thank you
Perna Avatar
August 2, 2024 at 2:37 PM
Lovely poem with great message!
Dejesus Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 10:36 PM
Thank you
Gifford Avatar
August 2, 2024 at 2:00 PM
A great poem, beautifully written,Jeanine. Congratulations on it being POTD. Have a wonderful weekend.
Dejesus Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 10:37 PM
Thank you
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2024 at 12:53 PM
Remember the bright side like you’re saying:)
Dejesus Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 10:37 PM
Indeed.
M  Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 12:21 PM
A lovely poem Jeanine …..belated Congrats on POTD! Debx
Dejesus Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 8:09 PM
Thank you
Rodrigues Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 6:40 AM
If we struggle to the end, God knows. There is hope at the end of the tunnel, and light peeks through from time to time, before we end our sojourn.
Dejesus Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 5:49 PM
Indeed
Baker Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 8:22 PM
Congratulations on your fine POTD, Jeanine! Enjoy your special day of recognition! A poet in Texas, Bill
Dejesus Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 12:36 PM
Thank you
Edmonds  Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 10:47 PM
A beautiful poem of hope in times of trouble Jeanine. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Dejesus Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 12:15 AM
Thank you!
Nicole Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 7:31 PM
After a storm, ' the sun will shine again. ' So true. In life, continue to look above for strength, this will certainly help when moments ' feel heavy and hard to bear. ' Your thoughts are beautiful, tender and uplifting, all at the same time. Congratulations Jeanine, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Dejesus Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 8:50 PM
Thank you so much! Hugs
Crandall Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 10:15 AM
Jeanine, while it often doesn't seem like it, was you say is so true, and there are times it's important to know that - "all things must pass".
Dejesus Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Indeed
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 9:39 AM
Congratulations on your receiving honour of POTD, Dear Jeanine! Very positive, optimistic thoughts expressed in every word of your poem - "For even in darkness, there is still light." Best wishes ~
Dejesus Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 9:46 AM
Thank you so much!
Greenhough Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 7:44 AM
Congratulations on POTD. I Enjoy your beautiful poem.
Dejesus Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 9:47 AM
Thank you
Goldsmith Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win.  A wonderful rhyme write. Love your line, " Hold on to hope and don't be a quitter," So Very True... Have a blessed day writing away............................
Dejesus Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 9:47 AM
Thank you
Rodgers Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 7:29 AM
Dearest Jeanine, your poem beautifully encapsulates the turbulent journey of life, reminding us to cling to hope amidst the storms. It's even in our darkest moments; there's a flicker of light. I loved how your words offered peace and strength, guiding us through rough seas. Congratulations on the POTD—it's a testament to the power of your poetry to uplift and inspire. Thank you for sharing your gift with the world. Blessings, Daniel.
Dejesus Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Thank you
Williams Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 4:34 AM
Beautifully stated. Anything is possible with Hope. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD Jeanine...Hugs
Dejesus Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 9:51 AM
Thank you
May Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 4:13 AM
'For in the ashes, new beginnings can grow, And your strength and resilience will surely show", Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD .
Dejesus Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 4:15 AM
Thank you!
Kitchin Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 3:44 AM
Jeanine, a great poem, life is forever changing, congratulations on POTD.
Dejesus Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 4:17 AM
Thank you!
Seeker Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 3:25 AM
Powerful, encouraging words here, reflecting a never-say-die spirit. Warmest congratulations on POTD, Jeannie
Dejesus Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 4:17 AM
Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 3:16 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Jeanine :) - Great written :) - hugs
Dejesus Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 4:17 AM
Thank you so much! Hugs
Cunningham Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 2:42 AM
In life's Stormy seas we can always find a safe harbour, we should never give up on hope. Congratulations to you Jeanine on the honour of POTD. Tom
Dejesus Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 2:48 AM
Thank you so much!
Jones Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 2:04 AM
Congratulations on your encouraging potd!
Dejesus Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 2:37 AM
Thank you
Buhagiar Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 12:59 AM
Hold on to hope and don't be a quitter, Great words. Congratulations on your POTD.
Dejesus Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 2:38 AM
Thank you
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Hello Jeanine, I do agree. We must go with the flow.of life. I will make your day brighter . This poem you created will be my fav. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Dejesus Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 5:07 PM
Thank you
Wolf Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 8:01 PM
Sage advice, Jeanine. So true... Patience is its own reward too. ~ Gershon
Dejesus Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 5:07 PM
It sure does.
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