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When Life Encounters Opaque Space

When gusty winds blow, riling my troubled dawn in gelid woes Squall of my throes dissipates in scented whiffs of budding rose. As brazen fog shrouds mind, heightening my grief, poking fun Defyingly I step out in glinting rays of the dawning golden sun. Refusing to surrender when my tears dominate indignation Joy I find on the vibrant horizon, blazing sunset’s ruby elation. Verdant paradise appeals to pleas, adorning my shamrock hills Appeasing cry of stygian echoes storming from mountains of ills. If night reigns moonless and nightmares soon rage my dreams Comfort I find within soothing zeal of spring’s giggling streams. While strife of life endures in raging summers of unending heat Readily I seek blue oceans, surfing rhythmic tides’ buoyant beat. As laments of the world drown humanity in hapless deep dive Strength of nobility rises, helping weakened hands to survive. When the rancor of disillusionment exudes ambivalent sigh Autumn’s scarlet imprints eagerly vie, healing souls in russet dye. As hindrance of the ordinary distresses progress of mankind Delighted I am to see rationality unite, to defeat the unrefined. When sullen is my heart aching in the anguish of ashen skies Solace I derive from serene vibes gleaming your tranquil eyes. At times in my life, I encounter the black-holes of opaque space Yet, the light of day gets through in sanctuary of your embrace. August 19, 2020 Placed 1st: Sanctuary Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 4/5/2022 7:33:00 PM
"When sullen is my heart aching in the anguish of ashen skies Solace I derive from serene vibes gleaming your tranquil eyes"...... You beat every oddity of life with such positive vibes ! A lovely poem so beautifully rhyming and flowing with effortless ease. To my Fav.
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Date: 10/4/2020 5:11:00 PM
Great positivity, Vijay. I'm glad that love can lift you out of sorrow. Excellently written. :) Peace, Angie
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Date: 9/5/2020 9:43:00 AM
This is beautiful, Vijay; enjoyed.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2020 1:14:00 PM
Thank you MLK.
Date: 8/25/2020 6:27:00 AM
Such smooth lines you write dear Vijay sir, Comfort I find within soothing zeal of spring’s giggling streams~ each lines drenched with true feelings..!! It inspires hurt soul's to seek light amidst darkness..:-) Loved your title and the last couplet very much. I believe your fine.Have a lovely day.:-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 8:27:00 AM
You are so very kind--much appreciate, Deepa--many thanks.
Date: 8/24/2020 5:49:00 PM
Wonderful deserved winner here, Vijay. stay safe, my friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Harry--much appreciate.
Date: 8/24/2020 12:13:00 PM
Wonderful Vijay. Here we read of man's indomitable spirit, It is so important to learn to count our blessings instead of our curses. There is peace to be found even amid the uncertainty of the future for the Bible tells us that Knowing Christ Brings Peace In Troublesome Times. A fine write my friend. God Bless, JB
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/24/2020 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Judy.
Date: 8/24/2020 11:30:00 AM
Being one with nature certainly provides us with inspiration, Vijay. Just stopping back to congratulate you on your top win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/24/2020 12:50:00 PM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 8/23/2020 5:05:00 PM
There is loveliness here in ink...Nice flow too and expression...All the best Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/24/2020 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Arturo.
Date: 8/23/2020 5:03:00 AM
Congrats dear friend. Beautiful. Love to you
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/23/2020 5:15:00 AM
Thank you Gina.
Date: 8/22/2020 8:44:00 PM
Congratulations dear poet Vijay. This is such a splendid write...masterfully crafted!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/23/2020 5:14:00 AM
Thank you JCB.
Date: 8/22/2020 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay, great verse. Hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/23/2020 5:14:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 8/22/2020 3:05:00 PM
a tranquil read that deserves a top win... huge congrats, vijay..huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/23/2020 5:14:00 AM
Thank you Nette.
Date: 8/22/2020 1:48:00 PM
oh yes, I saw this just the other day. Wow, first place. Big congratulations , Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/23/2020 5:14:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 8/22/2020 6:49:00 AM
Everyone needs a sanctuary, mine is my husband - I love your last line - the light of day gets through in sanctuary of your embrace. Wonderful poem Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/22/2020 12:45:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer--much appreciate your kind remarks.
Date: 8/22/2020 6:48:00 AM
You have found your sanctuary in the wealth of your soul.. in your beloved.. and in the beauty of Nature, dear Vijay.. the poet has that great power to create their own immunity, inner joy and serenity.. and you have rendered this in a genuine poetic beauty, your reader identifies with and relishes in such challenging inner journeys! Congratulations on your outshining placement! You truly deserve it.. My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/22/2020 12:44:00 PM
Always a delight to read your comments Besma--much appreciate--many thanks. Regards.
Date: 8/22/2020 5:48:00 AM
You always do rhyme so well and this poem rhymes and flows perfectly.. So many great lines, describing what it is like to have a sanctuary, when all around is not how we want it to be.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/22/2020 12:44:00 PM
Thank you my friend for holding contests. Much appreciate your kind remarks.
Date: 8/21/2020 8:24:00 AM
... "Comfort I find within soothing zeal of spring's giggling streams" ... this is so beautiful, Vijay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/21/2020 2:15:00 PM
Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.
Date: 8/21/2020 8:18:00 AM
This and many more colorful images: Readily I seek blue oceans, surfing rhythmic tides’ buoyant beat.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/21/2020 2:14:00 PM
Thank you Kim--much appreciate.
Date: 8/20/2020 3:43:00 PM
Wonderful sanctuary, Vijay. That last line is so romantic.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 4:27:00 PM
Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.
Date: 8/20/2020 2:59:00 PM
Lovely, vibrant poem, Vijay--conveying how joy is found in love and sunshine even when the world is full of trouble. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 3:20:00 PM
Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.
Date: 8/20/2020 10:56:00 AM
phenomenal, vijay...light always resides in a sanctuary... been a while!...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 1:04:00 PM
Yes--haven't seen you in a while--hope you are okay. Much appreciate, Nette--many thanks.
Date: 8/20/2020 10:10:00 AM
A remarkable poem, Vijay! How wonderful it must be to find your sanctuary in your beloved's arms. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 1:04:00 PM
Thank you my friend. You are always so very kind--much appreciate, Carolyn.
Date: 8/20/2020 6:09:00 AM
Beautiful poetry... Loved the ending,!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 1:03:00 PM
Much appreciate Supraja--many thanks.
Date: 8/20/2020 5:36:00 AM
This poem is so nice and shows so many ways to find light in the darkness. Well written Vijay! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 1:03:00 PM
Thank you Heidi--much appreciate your kind remarks.
Date: 8/19/2020 6:40:00 PM
"Yet, the light of day gets through in sanctuary of your embrace" Such a beautiful thought. Even in moments of darkness, light will always find a way to shine through. Your words tangle gently around me and my heart. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 4:41:00 AM
Lovely to read your comments my friend. Much appreciate-- many thanks, Brandy.
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