When Jesus Christ Was Born

Stars have never told a lie when wise men look unto the sky.
Messages from God on high, of happiness his angels cry,
Soon dawns a blessed morn.
Wise men travel through a land 
with stately camels over sand,
Their caravan majestically grand
When Jesus Christ was born.

Shepherds watching over sheep, baby lambs they safely keep.
Some of them were fast asleep on a mountain rough and steep,
Soon dawns a blessed morn.
An Angel to these men appear
Saying they should have no fear
For the Christ child is now near,
When Jesus Christ was born.

To Bethlehem they journey long, Joseph with his love so strong,
Mary with child had done no wrong; the baby did to God belong
Soon dawns a blessed morn.
This baby comes to save from sin
No rooms were found in any Inn
A stables all they found for him
When Jesus Christ was born.

A star shone brightly overhead, lighting up this humble shed,
A lowly manger for his bed, the joyful news had quickly spread
When dawned that blessed morn.
Here wise men came and gifts did bring
Shepherds bowed to their new King
Mankind rejoices while angels sing
When Jesus Christ was born.


Contest: One of your Best
12.01.2014
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Deschler Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 12:39 AM
I really enjoyed the rhyming and smooth flow of this amazing write. Congrats on the win, Brenda!
Mehta Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 5:25 AM
I like the structure of the poem, congrats on the win, Brenda
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 11:12 PM
a very well deserved win, sweet Brenda!! Congrats to you.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 10:50 PM
U r blessed Brenda! Amazingly beautiful write my dear! Congrats on huge win!
Yvonne Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 7:06 PM
Amazing! Congratulations Brenda on your well deserved win with this poem blessed! A Fav!
Allison Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 4:28 PM
dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx
Schumacker Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 3:13 PM
Hi Brenda. That was a very enjoyable poem and very well structured. Congratulations on your great win. Take care. Earl
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January 19, 2015 at 2:59 PM
Super...Super...Super...I love it...Best wishes to you.
Callus Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 10:34 AM
This lovely and inspiring poem written with clever rhyme has been awarded a very merited win. Well done Brenda, and congratulations!! // paul
Haight Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Hi Brenda, stopping by to say congratulations on your nice win for your lovely poem. Hugs, Sandra
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December 9, 2014 at 12:53 PM
What can be added to the innefable?Best regards and wishes of the white season.O.B
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 1:39 PM
Thank you Ovidiu
Bear Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:37 AM
What a beautiful way to tell the Christmas story. Really enjoyed the visual. Hope you have a Merry Christmas Hugs and blessings Edith
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 1:38 PM
Thank you so much Edith. I hope you also have a blessed Christmas.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 8:43 PM
I came back to read this to Dylan again! He likes it. I'm going to fave it so we can read it every year...thanks for sharing your poems with him.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 9:20 PM
Thank you and Dylan so much Rhonda.
Haight Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 5:35 PM
Brenda, this is such a beautiful poem and story about the birth of Our Lord and the real meaning of Christmas! Your words have shaped the imagery of that Blessed night perfectly! 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 6:43 AM
Thank you so much Sandra.
Gifford Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 4:28 PM
An inspirational poem, Brenda, about the birth of our King. A 7, and good luck in the contest. You know that with your talent you are going to walk away a winner. Christmas blessings to you, Darlene
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 1:00 PM
- A really beautiful poem, dear Brenda - I wish you luck in the contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 1:58 PM
Thank you so much Anne Lise
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 10:38 AM
This truly is one of your best so beautifully you penned the Christmas story - good luck:-) Hugs Jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 11:30 AM
Thank you so much Jan. I appreciate your sweet comment. XOXO
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 8:39 AM
This is a beautiful and inspiring poem, Brenda, and perfect for the contest and Christmas season!! I'm going to read this to Dylan tonight, too. Hugs, Rhonda
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 9:43 AM
Thanks so much Rhonda. That makes me happy to know.
Trifiatis Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 8:00 AM
Uplifting and Joyful, a marvelous tale majestically written, Dear Brenda. Good luck!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 9:43 AM
Thank you Demetrios
Onclaud Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 2:24 AM
the miracle of nativity so finely expressed through your story, Brenda... I feel your joy!... huggs
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 7:04 AM
Thank you Nette
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December 2, 2014 at 2:14 AM
You've penned a very beautiful poem, my dear friend Brenda. Truly enjoyed it! A 7 for me! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxxxx D.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 7:04 AM
Thank you Dorian.
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