When It Rain's

The rain has been my friend since I can remember.
Each droplet of water causing me to smile and feel loved.
For all my life the only person I had was me, 
A friend was just another word for me to hate.

When I am sad no one is there to cheer me up, 
When I need to be held no one is there to embrace.
I fear to be alone, because I am alone, 
Just a waste of the existence I was gifted.

But when it rains everything washes away.
I can smile, feel numb even if it is just for an hour.
Some may think it's just water, 
But to me it is so much more.

So as I sit, I let the rain consume me whole.
For that hour I will be in peace.
The smile on my face, the sadness in my heart
All means nothing; just a passing of time until I die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/28/2008 10:05:00 AM
Kija - Welcome to Poetry Soup! Wishing you a Happy and Joyous New Year! Peace always, John
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Date: 12/25/2008 2:09:00 PM
Kija - I just wanted to stop by and welcome you to the Soup – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/18/2008 1:22:00 PM
Great poem! This is exactly how I feel when I watch the rain. I have no thoughts or feelings, I'm just there. It's pretty much the only time when things are peaceful. Well put! Kristin
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Date: 12/17/2008 11:53:00 PM
This is a sad tale of loneliness, it is the poet's curse, perhaps. in the second stanza it should be 'no one' instead of 'no'. I could feel the pain of this piece.
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