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When In a Quandary

When life takes a turn for the worse And the clock you'd like to reverse When it seems like you can't go on And your coolest poise is long gone When life seems like a long penance And love gives you a wrong sentence When the perfume of sadness sprays And long-suffering patience frays When you stand at the quay of love And no miracle comes from 'bove Then take time to breathe, be grateful Coz God's always good and faithful When your quiver is filled with tears And life's happiness disappears When in a quandary you're left And you're alone, feeling bereft When you enter a quaint diner And feel out of place, not finer When your hair turns platinum grey And you feel older than you say When your prayers go unanswered And you feel your hope is shattered Then take time to breathe, be grateful Coz God's always good and faithful 02.17.2021 For Michelle Faulkner's "Mind your P's and Q's" contest

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Date: 3/8/2021 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Jo! Linda
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Date: 3/7/2021 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love your line, "Coz God's always good and faithful." And He is. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 3/6/2021 7:47:00 PM
True words Jo, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 3/6/2021 4:47:00 PM
what wonderful rhyme Jo, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 3/6/2021 9:58:00 AM
I like the flow of the rhymes here, and the clever lines like 'And the clock you'd like to reverse' and 'And you feel older than you say' - I've had days like that! Congratulations and thank you for entering~
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Date: 2/23/2021 8:12:00 PM
You used those words in such a beautiful way. Whatever happens, happens for good, be grateful. Good message. Take care, Rama
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Date: 2/18/2021 1:44:00 PM
I really like the way you used those words. VEry well done!!
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Date: 2/17/2021 4:55:00 AM
- Lovely poem, Jo :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/17/2021 4:12:00 AM
Wow... Wonderful writing. I love it. A sure winner. God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 2/17/2021 2:29:00 AM
Great poem! All the best for the contest!
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Date: 2/17/2021 1:11:00 AM
How true. God is always good and faithful. ~~
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