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When I'm With You

3/16/18 @11:35a When I’m with you I loose all track of time, as though you posses and capture my mind. Your touch electrify’s and stimulates my core, making me beg and want you more. Your lips and sweet kisses make me loose all control… hijacking my desires, you take over as pilot I surrender to your leading as though I don't know how to fly yet. You have become entwined into the fibers of my flesh, like an intricate pattern that somehow just seems to mesh… We have already melted together, how am I going to disconnect? What am I going to do with you… how am I going to make it through? Through to the other side, where your magic fingers don't caress and open me wide… How did I let you cause such an infection… Yet, I’m still longing for your deep injection

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Date: 6/11/2018 5:34:00 PM
I really like this poem. It's well-written. The imagery is spot on for all of the love birds out there who can relate!
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Date: 5/20/2018 9:52:00 PM
A beautiful poem, and you are right, people who are in love do lose control, and surrender. It is like an infection. Well- played.
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Diane Brewer
Date: 5/21/2018 5:09:00 PM
I’m new to this, but I enjoy the expression of poetry. Thank you for your kind words.