When I Was Lost

When I sank...the friend I had were blind leaders; 
Among thorns and thistle and innocent robbers 
I did spend and spread my gold without manners;
I was rotten and dying but was soaked in flatters.

Parasites and predators build mansions within me, 
Arrows and shadows stings and threatens me: 
All these terrors I could not see but could feel,
…I was lost in the mist and could not see.

As a sheep without shepherd I went astray,
Useless as the sewage; I was rotten, stinking and decay,
Hopeless and restless; hopeful in nonsense I was all day;
For in the factory of fear and failure I did serve without pay.

In seasons of sorrow there was none to comfort 
Blind masters could only help increased my tears with cost, 
All they could offer torn my pocket and emptied my pot,
Master of all misers was I when I was lost.

The days are gone but now are stories: 
I was blind and blurred and used bad glasses,
I was weak and lame and used broken clutches 
So I came to the cross and rolled in dust and ashes. 

I surrendered my sins and sorrow;
Now, His saving grace and glory I know,
I’m free from the forceful, fiery foe,
I now enjoy God’s glory grace and glow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 2/28/2010 9:25:00 AM
Awesome journey we trod in the misery of our wilderness mind, lost from the reality of the good truth of Agape, Adeleke. I have a poem similiar to this "The Journey's Finish" I thank you for supporting my contest with this awesome experience. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/27/2010 6:05:00 PM
My congratulations on your win in the contest, Adeleke! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:55:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem and placement in Moses contest.. a wonderful write and win for u to enjoy.. luv..Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/22/2010 11:23:00 AM
Your message is very true to life, Adeleke. I certainly appreciate you taking the time to express in your words, and tell us of your journey, the likes of which, has certainly been our own. Thanks for sharing this with us, I am sure many can relate to your own journey. Sincerely, "Big Love", Moses
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Date: 1/22/2010 11:15:00 AM
I want to graciously thank you for your support of my contest. Sincerely, Moses
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