When I Visited a Mountain Temple In Korea

Shadows on the valley floor
Appear with the rising sun
Pine trees cling to the steep slopes
Over boulders a stream runs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 21, 2009 at 10:12 AM
Excellent work Jim, intense imagery...Raul
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March 20, 2009 at 11:12 AM
fantastic visual, Jim! good work! Jim
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