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When I Threw the Unhandy Gloves Away

When I threw the wee unhandy gloves away, The smiling little cold hands watched the display, And the clock struck ‘high five’ and chimed ‘hooray’ Putting gloves on small hands can cause much dismay, No more small fingers to get stuck or go astray, When I threw the wee unhandy gloves away Mitts slide gracefully upon small hands without delay, Grown-ups - think of the precious time saved in a day, And the clock struck ‘high five’ and chimed ‘hooray’ Before, ten minutes less coffee time – not okay! I wrote to my local politician that same day, When I threw the wee unhandy gloves away In a fiddly box little fingers cannot sway, With Mitts there is space for growing hands to sashay, And the clock struck ‘high five’ and chimed ‘hooray’ Gloves relegated to the bin to stay, Consignments of mittens now on their way, When I threw the wee unhandy gloves away, And the clock struck ‘high five’ and chimed ‘hooray’ Date: 05/01/23 Contest: Of what use are gloves to fingers that only understand mittens Sponsor: John Lawless

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Date: 1/25/2023 6:25:00 AM
A fitting villanelle, well done, and congratulations
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W J Clarke
Date: 1/26/2023 6:29:00 AM
Thank you very much Terry for the compliments and for reading my poem. Much appreciated:-)
Date: 1/24/2023 2:54:00 PM
A villanelle written while wearing mittens, my gloves are off to you. Nicely done with this (for me) troublesome form. Thanks for participating in the contest
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W J Clarke
Date: 1/25/2023 6:07:00 AM
Thank you John for hosting an ‘out of the box’ contest :-)
Date: 1/9/2023 9:05:00 AM
Dear W J, your exceptional poem is both vibrant and vivid. Your wonderful imagery and excellent rhymes capture the spirit of the theme with finesse. Splendid! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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W J Clarke
Date: 1/9/2023 2:29:00 PM
Thank you very much Susan for reading my poem. I really appreciate your encouraging comments.
Date: 1/5/2023 8:41:00 PM
This is a brilliant piece of poetry, WJ:) hope it wins:)
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W J Clarke
Date: 1/7/2023 12:31:00 PM
Thank you Jo.

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